Which revision of the passage makes the best use of transitions?

Which Revision Of The Passage Makes The Best Use Of Transitions?

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Answer 1

Answer:

B.

Explanation:

It sounds better than the rest of them

Answer 2

Answer:

B I believe

Explanation:

it sounds more gramaticly correct


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Is this an example of pathos? ↓

Women must work three months longer on average to equal what men earned in a year.

Even in job categories, such as child care, that are predominantly occupied by women, they still only earn about 95 percent of men's wages for performing the same jobs.

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This is a mix of Pathos and Logos, pathos because the topic of women working longer and logos because of the evidence

Answer:

pathos

[ˈpāˌTHäs]

NOUN

a quality that evokes pity or sadness.

Explanation:

SYNONYMS ; piteousness, SADNESS, pitifulness.

your answer is essentially correct, but a bit controversial on the women thing.. otherwise, nice work

on the Women must work three months longer on average to equal what men earned in a year. The men are the ones that we feel bad in the sentence  for because they work a year, and women  a year

can i have some help maybe some pointers how to write an effective conclusion paragraph.

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Answer:

All you really have to do is focus, have faith, and just try your best.

Explanation:

Answer:

1. restate the claim you made in your introduction paragraph in a different way

2. restate the reasoning you gave in your body paragraphs in a differnt

way

3. depending on your topic, apply what new information you've found or the claim you made to specific real-life examples (like if your topic was about substance abuse in poorer neighborhoods, maybe talk about the opioid crisis)

that's really it! don't be afraid to ask me more questions if that wasn't clear!

Read this excerpt from paragraph 4 of “We All Learn About Halloween”:
A few days later, my storehouse rolling with nuts, I began the race for apples. Entering this race were squirrels, raccoons, and a fat old skunk who looked as if he could eat not another bite. He was ready to sleep his autumn meal off, and I resented him because he did not need my apples. However, I did not toy with him.

Part A What is the meaning of the word resented as it is used in this except?
a. made fun of
b. felt anger toward
c. played tricks on
d. became afraid of

Part B Which reason best states why Sam resented the skunk?
a. The skunk looked repulsive and unnatural after it had grown fat.
b. The skunk could have defended himself with his terrible smelling spray.
c. The skunk had won the race for apples before Sam had even started.
d. The skunk was already prepared for winter and Sam wasn’t.

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Answer:

Part A: B, Part B: D

Explanation:

"a fat old skunk who looked as if he could eat not another bite"

"He was ready to sleep his autumn meal off, and I resented him because he did not need my apples."

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Answer:

Part A is B

Part B is D

Explanation: your welcome

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Q.1. What situation appeals to the speaker in "Ode on Solitude"? A. Working constantly B. Traveling around the world C. Existing unseen by others D. inheriting wealth

Q.2. Identify the rhyme scheme in lines 1-4 of "Ode on Solitude." A. abca B. abcd
C. abba D. abab

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Answer:

B

Explanation:

Answer:

Q.1 C

Q.2 A

Explanation:

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What is third person limited narration?

Group of answer choices

A.narrator is outside the story and only knows the feelings of one character

B.narrator outside the story but knows everyones feelings

C.narrator is inside the story

D.narrator is explaining instructions

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I’d say D. if not then I’m sorry.

Write a paragraph that uses the word impression at least twice, each time according to a
different definition of the word. Also, correctly use one synonym of impression in your
paragraph. Look over the provided dictionary and thesaurus excerpts for help.
The paragraph can be about any topic, except the word itself. (Do not write anything that
resembles the following: "The word impression means
and
A synonym for
impression is

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Answer:

I wanted to make a good impression on her, but I wasnt shure how. I put on my best suit and tie before heading out. I took one last look at the mirror and realized there was a deep impression on my shirt, from my dog.

John wanted to make a good impression on Elena while asking her to prom. He put on his best suit, his best tie, his best shoes, and even his best socks. He needed her to have a good feeling about him, so he wouldn’t get rejected. He put a smile on his face and started to walk towards her. However, one of John’s friends stopped him halfway, because John had an impression in the middle of his shirt, from when his older brother wore the suit to a party.


The word impression is used twice, each with a different meaning. The synonym that I used was “feeling”l in the second sentence (“He needed her to have a good feeling about him, so he wouldn’t get rejected”).

Something like that should work, hope this helped

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Answer:

I cannot see it

Explanation:

Answer:

D= Metaphor

B= Personification

C= Simile

A= Allusion

E= Paradox

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"CONFLICTING NEWS REPORTS ON THE FATE OF THE SINKING TITANIC"
5.Compare and contrast the two newspaper articles. Explain the similarities and differences in each article’s point of view about the incident and the rescue of the passengers.

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yes the other guys is correct now make me the brainliest for reassuring you :))

11 points for the answer

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THE PERSON THAT ANSWERED IS WRONG, ITS ACTUALLY A.

The resolution (or denouement) of a story refers to
(select one)
The details that lead up to the central conflict

The main conflict of the story coming to a head: the big battle scene, for example

The introduction to the story that places the reader in the “when” and “where” of the story

The end of the story when all of the threads are tied together

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Answer:

D,

Explanation:

the resolution, is when all the major problems get resolved and the story gets wrapped up.

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The answer is D, the end of the story when all of the threads are tied together, i agree.

Does anybody have ideas for an essay? WILL GIVE BRAINLIEST!!!! The essay is on "Culture in American Media". You do NOT need to complete the essay, I would just like a possible couple of sites to use and/or notes/ideas. THANKS IN ADVANCE!

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You can do one on how social media in America has taken over most lives and how the pandemic has affected the amount of online use is being used now if that makes sense

Read the monologue below. Explain what the monologue tells you about the character. Higgins: There! That's all you get our of Eliza. Ah-ah-ow-oo! No use explaining. As a military man you ought to know that. Give her her orders: that's what she wants. Eliza: You are to live here for the next sixth months, learning how to speak beautifully, like a lady in a florist's shop. If you're good and do whatever you're told, you shall sleep in a proper bedroom, and have lots to eat, and money to buy chocolates and take rides in taxis. If you're naughty and idle you will sleep in the back kitchen among the black beetles, and be walloped by Mr. Pearce with a broomstick. *
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Answer:  So from what I've gathered from reading this paragraph it seems that Eliza's nice and willing to help Higgin's to become a proper lady, But it seems that Mr. Pearce is not so nice and will be harsh.

Explanation:

Eliza: You are to live here for the next sixth months, learning how to speak beautifully, like a lady in a florist's shop. If you're good and do whatever you're told, you shall sleep in a proper bedroom, and have lots to eat, and money to buy chocolates and take rides in taxis. If you're naughty and idle you will sleep in the back kitchen among the black beetles, and be walloped by Mr. Pearce with a broomstick. *

I truly hope this helps!! :)

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just do what the other guy did

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Answer: Dreams Deferred

1. Verbs: Dry, Fester, Run, Stink, Sags, Explode.

2. It implies that they are the one that are deferring their dreams.

3.    1. Dry up like a raisin in the sun

      2.  Fester like a sore and then run

      3. Stink like rotten meat

      4. Crust and sugar over

      5.   Sags like a heavy load

They are reasons or explanations as for where or what the dream does when you complete it or fail it.

4. People need to accomplish their dreams because there usually is an internal feeling or failure if they aren't completed.

Answer: Dreams

1. Broken winged bird that cannot fly, and Life is a barren field frozen with snow.

2. They mean that without having dreams or goals in your life, you aren't doing anything important with your life and feel a sense of nothingness

3. Dreams are things that we want to do and achieve in our life time and the time that it takes to achieving those goals gives us responsibilities that we use in our daily lives and it helps use learn and be able to reach our goals and accomplish our dreams

Some people want school to start later. Others are against this. What do the two groups say? What do you think? Explain your answer.

Write your answer in the box below.

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Well in my opinion, people that start schools later have more time to get their 9 hours of sleep and because of this they can function better with having plenty of rest. People like to argue that it wouldn’t be a good idea because people have work early in the mornings and wouldn’t be able to take their kids to school later. It’s been proven that the people who get more hours of sleep can take in more knowledge than others that don’t.
Some people say they want it to start later they say I want school to start later so I have a longer summer some say I want it to start normal so I won’t half to be in school for so long EXPLANATION ppl have different opinions

n "A Whole New World," which event leads Tanisha to continue using the old camera?

Photographing the rock helped her appreciate nature, which she previously disliked.

Photographing the rock allowed her to notice aspects of the world of which she was previously unaware.

Photographing the rock brought her closer to her father and grandfather, who had spent years taking photos of the New Mexican desert.

Photographing the rock enabled her to make connections between nature and her own schooling, which could improve her academic performance.

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Answer:

Photographing the rock brought her closer to her father and grandfather, who had spent years taking photos of the New Mexican desert.

Explanation:

i did the quiz hope this helps

The event leads Tanisha to continue using the old camera "Photographing the rock allowed her to notice aspects of the world of which she was previously unaware. Thus the correct option is B.

What is photography?

A photograph refers to an image that represents beauty or anything that can be captured by using the camera in order to store it as memory. Photography refers to an art or technique to capture photos with effectiveness.

In the story," A Whole New World"  Tanisha, the narrative's central figure, came to this conclusion. Every year at the beginning of the year, she misses her grandfather who she loves very much.

Tanisha frequently takes or takes a picture of her grandfather, keeping it close to her. She takes pictures of her grandpa in an effort to feel more connected to him.

Therefore, option B is appropriate.

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Read the word pair.

comedy: laughter

Which word pair has the same relationship as comedy and laughter?

sorrow: joy
sentence: paragraph
bicycle: transportation
carelessness: accident

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Bicycle: transportation hope this helps

Answer:

Carelessness: accident

As comedy often produces laughter, carelessness can produce accidents.

Explanation:

This is called an Analogy.  Let's take a look/ comedy: laughter. We read analogies like this Comedy is to Laughter. We replace the colon with is to. This analogy means: Something that is comedic has laughter.

Now use the process of elimination:

Sorrow is to joy ❌

Sentence is to  paragraph ❌

Bicycle is to transportation ❌

Carelessness is to accident ✅

Why does Jonas “no longer care about himself”?
A.Jonas only cares about himself because eventually he will find the destination that he is looking for.
B. Jonas only cares about Gabriel because Gabriel will guide him to their final destination.
C.Jonas no longer cares about himself because he knows that Gabriel and him will not make it.
D. Jonas no longer cares about himself because he is putting all of his hope, love, and effort into protecting Gabriel.

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Answer:

D. Jonas no longer cares about himself because he is putting all of his hope, love, and effort into protecting Gabriel.

Explanation:

Which statement best evaluates this response to the writing prompt?

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Answer:

What's the answers?

Explanation:

how do you write a good thesis statement one how naps are good for your health?

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Answer: you ask a question first

Explanation:

Nobles ruled the city-states for a long time
true or false

please helpp

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Answer: True

Explanation: The Nobles gave citizenship to the Athens, who owned no land at all. They also helped change the laws and government over time to give the people more rights.

True.
Nobles gave citizenship to Athens

What is the best definition of a claim in an argumentative essay?

Question 1 options:

a)

Ownership of a piece of land


b)

The most exciting part of the plot.


c)

An expression of the author’s stance or position.


d)

Factual evidence which supports the author’s stance.

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Answer:

d. because its argumentative,the author is trying to prove a point.

Explanation:

I think It is the letter d

(what would be the tone and mood?)
He cautiously glanced behind him, for fear of his imagined pursuers, then hurriedly walked on, jumping at the slightest sound, even of a leaf cackling under his own foot.

Mood:
Tone:

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Answer:

The tone is almost sympathetic but informing and the mood is scared.

Explanation:

He cautiously glanced behind him, for fear of his imagined pursuers, then hurriedly walked on, jumping at the slightest sound, even of a leaf cackling under his own foot.

Hope this helps!

Answer: The tone is anxious and mood is scared.

IF YOU READ THE BOOK" A LONG WALK TO WATER¨ CAN YOU PLEASE HELP ME WITH THIS ONE QUESTION

“…like a sleek evil bird,” Salva thinks. What does this simile describe? Why does Salva use the adjective “evil”?

IF YOU HELP ME AND GIVE ME A ANSWER THAT IS NOT FOOLISH THEN I WILL GIVE YOU BRAINLIEST

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At the beginning of the novel, Salva and his schoolmates endure the terrifying attack on their village and have to rush out into the bush. Out there Salva notes, "Overhead, a jet plane veered away like a sleek evil bird" (6). It is a stunningly simple and effective simile. The reader can envision the plane swooping above the frightened people, reminding them that danger can from below and above. The plane is like an animal in its power and predatory nature.

Simile: Salva's mouth

When Salva hears someone call his name and he turns around to see his uncle, Park writes, "Salva's mouth closed and opened again, as if he were a fish" (34). It is a comical image; the reader can sense through this effective simile that Salva is utterly agape and flabbergasted at the coincidence of encountering his uncle out here.

failures of mae jemison

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Her name and her life

Complete this blank: All spiders make silk but not all spiders silk is same they make many _ so the blank need to have at least 7 letters PLEASE HLEPPP NOW P:AESEE HELP!!

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Answer:

they make many Variety

Explanation:

Variety

Variety? I’m Not Sure

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excerpt from “Mohandas Gandhi: Truth in Action” by Vanessa Wright

“Thief,” thought Mohandas Gandhi. “I am a thief.”
Fifteen-year-old Mohandas looked at the gold in his hand. He had stolen it from his brother. It was not his first theft: earlier, he had stolen coins from the family’s servants. But now, the gold in his hand burned like a hot coal. He sat down and wrote a letter of confession to his father.
Would his father punish him? Mohandas watched as his father read the note. Tears rolled down his father’s cheeks, wetting the paper. But there was no scolding. Silently, his father tore the letter into pieces. Later, Gandhi realized that, in his father’s response, he had seen the principle of Ahimsa—of nonviolence—in action. He dedicated his life to that principle.
Q: Which choice best describes an anecdote?
A. a brief funny or engaging tale about an actual person or incident
B. a description of a person featured in an informational text
C. a surprising fact that creates interest text
D. a remedy that reverses the effect of a poison
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Thank you so much! Hope you have a great rest of your day!

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It’s most likely A or B
It’s B, A description of a person featured in an informational text.



Explanation : The text is about young Gahndi and how childhood influenced him to grow into the person he is today.

Write a paragraph about any of these: Tacos, burritos, pizza, ramen

Paragraph checklist:
1. Indent your paragraph.
2. 1st sentence: A hook
3. 2nd sentence: A topic sentence that tells the reader what you are going to write about.
4. 3rd - 5th sentences: Supporting details to support your topic sentence
5. Last sentence: A closing sentence that restates the topic sentence and/or adds a personal thought.

Make sure:
-your sentences are not short and choppy.
-you use sensory language to appeal to the five senses of your readers
-you have at least two transitions
-your capitalization, spelling, and punctuation are correct

Write your paragraph below. Good luck!

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Answer:

IM WRITIN" BOUT PIZZA BABY

Explanation:

        What's the most order fast food for parties? That's right, pizza! Did you know that the earliest mention of the word "pizza" was in A.D. 997?! Pizza was made by Raffaele Eposito, who is a famous Naples baker. Also apparently, Mariah Carey LOVES pizza! Anyways, pizza will always be a loved Italian dish.

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you have wright the literal meaning of the poem "the railway train"

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Answer:

In the poem Emily Dickinson presents the Railway train in the metaphor of a mythical horse. The metaphor is appropriate, because it suggests the superhuman power of the train. ... The speaker appreciates the train's speed and power as it goes through valleys, stops for fuel, then "steps" around some mountains.

Explanation:

Answer:

In the poem Emily Dickinson presents the Railway train in the metaphor of a mythical horse. The metaphor is appropriate, because it suggests the superhuman power of the train. ... The speaker appreciates the train's speed and power as it goes through valleys, stops for fuel, then "steps" around some mountains.

Explanation:

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