Read the paragraph.

Even though my life is very busy, I spend as much time as I can with my family. I often ask my dad, who is an excellent athlete to play soccer with me. I also enjoy taking walks, baking desserts, and playing cards with my mom. However, nothing is better than watching movies with my loyal cat, Max.

Which sentence from the paragraph has been revised correctly?

Even though, my life is very busy, I spend as much time as I can with my family.
However, nothing is better than watching movies with my loyal, cat, Max.
I also enjoy taking walks, baking desserts, and playing cards, with my mom.
I often ask my dad, who is an excellent athlete, to play soccer with me.

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Answer 1
D: I often ask my dad, who is an excellent athlete, to play soccer with me.

Related Questions

Use the sentence to complete the activity.

Jessica ate the cookies that her daughter baked for her.

In one to two sentences, identify the bold words as an independent clause, dependent clause, or phrase, and explain their functions within the sentence.

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Answer:

hope this helps

Explanation:

Its a dependent clause because like the sentence Lexie gave the words "That her daughter baked for her" does not make sense alone so its a dependent clause, so its not a complete thought.

The sentence to complete the activity is :

- It is dependent clause.

Clauses

Lexie gave the words "That her daughter baked for her" does not make sense alone so its a dependent clause, so its not a complete thought.

A dependent clause may be a gather of words that contains a subject and verb but does not express a total thought.

A dependent clause cannot be a sentence. Regularly a subordinate clause is stamped by a dependent marker word.

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Answer:21. D

22. B

23. A

24. D

Explanation:

21:D 22:B 22:C 24:D


2. According to the owners of the Titanic, what was special about the new ship?

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Answer:

13

Explanation:add them both tohether and make sure it doesnt sink next time

im always right

Answer:

according to the builders and owners of the titanic, what was special about the new ship? It was bigger and more luxurious than any other ship at the time. It was supposed to be unsinkable. what warnings did the titanic receive from nearby ships?

Explanation:

Describe in own words if any give me correct answer l give brainliest

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Answer:

I love my father for he is my father however sometimes he can be very prideful and thinks he is right all the time but my love for him will not change just for his flaws for your flaws make you who you are!

Explanation: I love your hand writing btw

Can someone help me with number 2, 3 and 4 ? I’m confusing with earn, spend and save.

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Explanation:

2. save

3.spend

4.earn

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My neighbor, Principal Skinner, gives out apples
Halloween.

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ewwwwwwwwwwww...........i

Answer:

My neighbor, Principal Skinner, gives out apples for Halloween.

Explanation:

ldk what u want me to do so i made it w more grammar.

The turtle became absolutely still. Even his giant flippers stopped moving in the
air.
What do these sentences suggest about how the turtle feels?

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Answer:

Scared maybe dead

Explanation:

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Please help me rewrite the sentence I’m so confused

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Answer:

Instead of taking a five yard slant for thirty yards, take it seventy yards and TD against your Eagles.

Answer:

Instead of taking a 5 yard slant for 30 yards take 70 yards and a TD against the Eagles.

Explanation:

Tbh I am also confused. I would be able to give a better response is they had given more information in the tweet they gave you. I hope this helps a bit if it can.

How can we use technology for the greater good?

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Answer:

we can use technology for the greater good by making technological advances in the medical and business industries

Explanation:

He has read three novels so far(passive or active voice?

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Answer:

Active

Explanation:

The subject will be at the first if it's active voice.

Describe one of the techniques william used to avoid being kidnapped

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Answer:

I'm just letting you know there no attacked photo making it hard to expain the tequniqes if you add explanation I can come back and help

Explanation:


Read the following sentences:
We go to Ernest when we're in trouble. He's the Bill Gates
of Mayville.
What does the allusion in this passage most clearly show?
A. Ernest is muscular.
B. Ernest is wealthy.
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C. Ernest is dangerous.
D. Ernest is fun loving.
SUBMIT

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Ernest is muscular and wealthy.

Answer:

Ernest is wealthy

Explanation:

got it right on the test

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Which quotation from Antigone contains an allusion? .

A."These girls? You have sentenced them both?"

B."You laugh at me. Ah, friends, friends, Can you not wait until I am dead?"

C."I will carry her far away Out there in the wilderness, and lock her Living in a vault of stone."

D."All Danae's beauty was locked away In a brazen cell where the sunlight could not come.""​

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Answer:

D

Explanation:

Took the k12 test and got it right

The  quotation from Antigone  that contains an allusion is that"All Danae's beauty was locked away In a brazen cell where the sunlight could not come." .

What is quotation?

A quotation is the repetition of a sentence, phrase, or passage from speech or text that someone has said or written.In oral speech, it is the representation of an utterance (i.e. of something that a speaker actually said) that is introduced by a quotative marker, such as a verb of saying.  Quotations in oral speech are also signaled by special prosody in addition to quotative markers. In written text, quotations are signaled by quotation marks.Quotations are also used to present well-known statement parts that are explicitly attributed by citation to their original source; such statements are marked with (punctuated with) quotation marks.

Quotations are often used as a literary device to represent someone's point of view. They are also widely used in spoken language when an interlocutor wishes to present a proposition that they have come to know via hearsay.

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Can anyone give me a easy Ted talk topic like a really easy ted talk topic please

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Answer:

Eating disorders.  the effects  

Explanation:

i guess

Answer:

You could try something involving sociology and society today.

- Reasonable solutions to overpopulation

- What are some ways in which different types of media content influence society's attitudes and behaviors?

- Is there a limit to freedom of speech in a civil society?

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What connection does the author draw between Granuaile and the Queen?

If you know the answers to the assessment questions you can put it in your answer :D

Here is the link to the article

https://www.commonlit.org/texts/granuaile

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Hope this helps btw we can’t tap on the link

In the article, the author connects Granuaile and the Queen by implying that although one is royalty, and the other a prisoner, they are equals. He support this in a few ways. When a courtier looks down upon her, she quickly corrects the girl by saying that where is from, she is just as powerful and important as the Queen. Once the two meet, "The two women looked each other straight in the eye. Each of them knew the other was strong, brave and fearless." In that moment, the author is saying that they acknowledged each other as equals. He continues and describes the how different they look, but how long they talk for despite how different the may seem. At the end, we can infer that the Queen respects Granuaile because she agreed to everything she asked for and more. Therefore, the author draws a connections between them by showing that despite where they came from, they are both equal to the other.

Help me in this pls !!!!

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Answer:

The first one is a fragment

the second one is a complete sentence

The third is a complete sentence

And I think the last one is a fragment

Explanation:

Sorry if I've got it wrong.

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Answer:

1. it is still being built

2. it hasnt been

3. its being

4. I've been biten

5. He's being

6. been eaten

7. its being

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Explanation:

What question will you be able to answer when you study with a purpose?
A. How fast can I read?
B. How can I score well on my tests?
O C. Who can help me study better?
D. Why am I studying?

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D. why am i studying

is there anyone who can help me out with a simple problem ??​

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Answer:

whicccch problem....................

Explanation:

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Read the paragraph below and find examples of metaphor, simile,
onomatopoeia, personification, oxymoron and/or alliteration.
Jody woke from her sleep to a faint crackling sound outside her
bedroom. Narrowing her eyes on the door, she noticed smoke
billowing in from the edges. As a panic response, she opened it to
see a bright burning blaze wrapping its arms around the hallway
leading to her room. Jody let out a screech, hoping her parents
would hear her. Streams of water fell down her cheeks as the heat
drew closer and closer. Though she was unable to see from the
smoke in the room, she heard a crash from the window. A
fireman, her savior, scooped her up in his arms and
brought her down the ladder to safety.

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Answer:

Explanation:

onomatopoeia:

crackling, crash

personification:

blaze wrapping its arms around the hallway

alliteration:

bright burning blaze

Metaphor

A  fireman, her savior

READ As you read lines 336-384, continue to cite text evidence. Evidence that the narrator has changed. In the margin, summarize the sequence of events that occur when the seventh man receives K's watercolors.

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Answer:

Explanation:

Animal parts.

What can you most likely conclude after reading the passage

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Answer:

It's A. People have mixed opinions about the use of cell phones in school.

Explanation: I got you

1) Your teacher has asked you to write an exciting adventure story. Which situation MOST CLOSELY matches this assignment? A) Charlene and Daisy are meeting to work together on their social studies report. Their topic is the history of transportation. B) While on a winter vacation, Rachel has to rescue her sister Lindsey on a ski slope. Lindsey has broken her leg and a storm is coming. C) Since he and his family moved, Travis misses his Grandfather most of all. When his grandfather gets a new laptop, they are able to keep in touch. D) Ten year old Keith is recovering from a kidney transplant. When he meets another ten year old patient, he begins to think the hospital won't be so bad.

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Answer:

C

Explanation:

It is exciting

Answer: B)  While on a winter vacation, Rachel has to rescue her sister Lindsey on a ski slope. Lindsey has broken her leg and a storm is coming.

Explanation: This is a story that creates suspense and makes the reader wonder what could happen next? creating conclusions in their mind having a curiosity as to what was the outcome? This isn't a ordinary everyday story  and has a intense hook.

what task does this writing prompt give u? PLS HELP

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Answer:

The task this prompt is giving you is to write a letter to the zookeeper to persuade him in order for you to let him know you will do a good job taking care of the animals

Explanation:

Why should your parents not have anything to do with your love life?

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Answer:

ummm okay ummm this is a dum question parents guide u thru ur love life so u dont fail e

Explanation:

Which of the following statements is TRUE ? I. The distance travelled by an object can be equaled to its displacement II. The displacement of a moving object can be greater than its distance travelled. III. The displacement of a moving object is lesser than its distance travelled.

a. I and II
b. II and III
c. I and III
d. I, II, and III

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Answer:

b

Explanation:

Answer:

I and III are correct statements.

In which of the following writing compositions would a humorous touch be most appropriate?
A. Academic lab report
B. Personal narrative
C. Research paper
D. Business report

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Answer:

Personal narrative

Explanation:

In Personal narrative would a humorous touch be most appropriate.

Answer:

B.Personal narrative

The meaning of sentence 13 is unclear.

What change should Derek make to improve the clarity of this sentence?


(12) Birds are some of the most unusual sleepers in the animal world. (13) Some have to migrate thousands of miles every year, and it leaves very little time for sleep. (14) The thrush is one bird that has found a way to survive with minimal sleep. (15) This bird lands briefly for short “micro-naps,” each lasting mere seconds, which is just long enough for it to re-energize for the next phase of the journey. (16) Some birds can even enter a form of sleep while flying, similar to the way underwater mammals can let half of their brain sleep while the other half is awake.

A- Change migrate to journey
B- Change every year to annually
C- Change it to the long trip
D- Change sleep to sleeping

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Answer:

C- Change it to the long trip

Explanation:

It is unclear because of the pronoun it so replacing it with a noun would make the sentence more clear.

Write
a letter to your friend describing about
'Manners and behaviour and its effects on
student life '​

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Answer:

Manners and behavior has effects on a students life because it can change them for the better or for the worst.

Explanation:

Manners and behavior has effects on a students life because it can change them for the better or for the worst. For example, if a student acts kind to others and is considerate and has many diffrent good traits, then people would like them for their kindness and good deeds. Another example is if a student is mean and selfish towards other people and have bad traits, then they will be avoided and isolated in loneliness, because nobody wants to be near them, in fear that they will be bullied.

Which of the following is an example of loaded language?
a.
obviously
c.
irrefutable
b.
clearly
d.
all of the above


Please select the best answer from the choices provided

A
B
C
D

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Answer: It's D. All of the above. Have a good day!

I think it’s d not sure though
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