PLZZZZ help me my Brian is not working today :(

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The changes you should make are grammar, make sure everything is capitalized, the way you right it makes sure it makes sense, and make sure to have catch their eyes. You want to make sure the grammar is good or else it will not sound very good. If you capitalized all the begins of a sentence, they will know it is a new sentence and they can see the paired. If it makes sense it would be read very easily because if it did not make sense they would have to go back and see what you tried to say. The last thing is you need to make sure you have a sentence that would be interesting to the reader so they keep on reading.

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I would change anybody who isn't in jail rightfully would be in jail and anybody who is in jail wrongfully would be free. There are so many people who are in jail now who don't deserve to be because they didn't do anything wrong, they were wrongfully convicted. However, there's still so many other inappropriate people, murderers, robbers, school shooters, child abusers, anybody who sells another person, who are out on the streets doing the unimaginable. While People who have been in jail for a long time suffer for those types of crimes. Lastly, that's why the one thing I would change would be people who deserve to be in jail go to jail and the all the other innocent human beings are let out of it.

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Hopes this helps!

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I have been selected to take part in a project at NASA. Astronomers are doing their best to build a radio telescope. The main task is that the radio telescope could detect alien life in outer space. The radio telescope will also create a map of the entire universe. The telescope includes 3000 separate antennas, and the telescope is also very powerful and sensitive. The telescope will let astronomers know more about dark energy and the telescope will also pick up faint radiation left over from the creations of the first stars, galaxies, or black holes. The construction site of this telescope is unusual, and it needs to be in an area free of radio interference. You can't really find locations in the world without technology, and it would be difficult to find the right location. I have been preparing for a week now, and I am so excited to the point where the radio telescope is on my mind everyday.

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Sorry if I did it wrong! I'm doing my best to help.

here i'm not sure if it's good but this is my try on it

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born in shimla on a thursday

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He compares previously expressed ideas to a corpse that a person drags around.

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He compares previously expressed ideas to a corpse that a person drags around.

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Emerson compares old, outgrown ideas to a corpse that a person drags around.

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Ethos

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Ethos is described as Credibility/Trust as well as "Cites credible sources"

When you cite a quote you have to give credit. so Ethos would be the most likely answer out of all three.

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Daedalus was bitter, angry, and jealous of Perdix's success at such a young age. Daedalus is jealous of Perdix's skill and wisdom. He wishes it could be his son, not Perdix, that is alive and well and angrily shoves Perdix out the tower.

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The audience for this narrative are pre-teenagers aged 10-12 who are witnessing or witnessing their parents' divorce. The purpose of this narrative is to help them overcome this moment.

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When my parents divorced I went through a moment of strong confusion, fear and sadness. I didn't know what was going to happen, how I should behave, if I should choose the side of one of my parents, if I would be abandoned ... in short, I had a lot of thoughts in my head. Nowadays I recognize that these thoughts were normal. We never imagined that our parents will divorce and our family who is our greatest security will be destroyed.

This may seem like the end of the world to us and we often blame ourselves for what is happening. When I faced this situation, I was very sad and people reprehended me, but why? Can't we be sad when a sad situation happens to us? The answer is yes, we can. So I would like to say that it's okay to be sad and worried about your parents' situation, but you must keep in mind that this sadness passes and that your parents will always love you, the divorce between them does not involve you and the In time you will readjust to your new reality and learn from experience, as I learned.

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1. A group of students, 2. To share a time when I struggled.

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hope this helps <3

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BRAINLIEST PLS I NEVER HAD ONE

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When joining two words or phrases with a coordinating conjunction, do not use a comma.

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sure

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Research projects are always useful and important. On one hand, when you are a senior high school student and you do a research project, you have to do a detailed analysis of a specific topic and that knowledge is always beneficial. You can discover a topic that you are interested in and it may become your future career.

On the other hand, your research project can also be constructive for your community or even to other parts of the world. When you do a research project you ask questions, you learn and you progress. If the topic of your research project is useful to your community, it means a progress to all the people that conforms it.

Explanation:

In this exercise, you have to explain why doing a research project would be useful not only to you but also to other people. It is important to understand that research is always useful because it involves learning and learning new things always leads to progress.

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1) base

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The sentence is dramatically correct if you put base in the sentence

Education is the base of progress. The reason why it is the base is because most educated people use there knowledge that they learned and create phenomenal work.

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um.... ok?

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Answer and Explanation:

"Crossing Brooklyn Ferry" is the poem by Walt Whitman that made him a pioneer of free verse. Free verse happens when a poem does not follow any rules for meter or rhyme schemes. Let's take a look at the excerpt provided:

Just as you feel when you look on the river and sky, so I felt,

Just as any of you is one of a living crowd, I was one of a crowd,

Just as you are refresh’d by the gladness of the river and the bright flow, I was refresh’d,

Just as you stand and lean on the rail, yet hurry with the swift current, I stood yet was hurried,

Just as you look on the numberless masts of ships and the thick-stemm’d pipes of steamboats, I

look’d.

Each line has a different length, so to speak. It is clear that Whitman had no concern for the number of syllables and the rhythm to be the same in each line. When we look at the last word or sound of the lines, we notice the same lack of concern for them to be similar or equal. We can tell there is the repetition of the phoneme /t/ at the end of each last word, but that is not enough to characterize rhyming. This is why this excerpt is a representative of free verse.

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BB

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The Europeans colonized Africans and made them slaves forced to work on plantations.

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Answer:

In the scale drawing, what will the length of the east side of the backyard be?

In the scale drawing, what will the length of the east side of the backyard be?

In the scale drawing, what will the length of the east side of the backyard be?

In the scale drawing, what will the length of the east side of the backyard be?

In the scale drawing, what will the length of the east side of the backyard be?

In the scale drawing, what will the length of the east side of the backyard be?

In the scale drawing, what will the length of the east side of the backyard be?

In the scale drawing, what will the length of the east side of the backyard be?

In the scale drawing, what will the length of the east side of the backyard be?

In the scale drawing, what will the length of the east side of the backyard be?

In the scale drawing, what will the length of the east side of the backyard be?

In the scale drawing, what will the length of the east side of the backyard be?

In the scale drawing, what will the length of the east side of the backyard be?

In the scale drawing, what will the length of the east side of the backyard be?

In the scale drawing, what will the length of the east side of the backyard be?

In the scale drawing, what will the length of the east side of the backyard be?

In the scale drawing, what will the length of the east side of the backyard be?

In the scale drawing, what will the length of the east side of the backyard be?

In the scale drawing, what will the length of the east side of the backyard be?

In the scale drawing, what will the length of the east side of the backyard be?

In the scale drawing, what will the length of the east side of the backyard be?

In the scale drawing, what will the length of the east side of the backyard be?

In the scale drawing, what will the length of the east side of the backyard be?

In the scale drawing, what will the length of the east side of the backyard be?

In the scale drawing, what will the length of the east side of the backyard be?

In the scale drawing, what will the length of the east side of the backyard be?

In the scale drawing, what will the length of the east side of the backyard be?

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Answer:

Im sorry, but this doesn't make sense. We need more context to the question to be able to give a valid answer.

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Here's something that might help!

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So I've decided to make a quick starter for your poem, which you could use in the 1st stanza; I've made it myself, but you don't need to include credits.

"A gleeful smile,

But with some style!

Alas, a beautiful sight,

Blissful and bright,

I've finally found something that I've liked!"

Annddd..there it is, I hope it works out! (Feel free to change and edit whatever you would like.)

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Talk back to my mom

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Answer:climbed on top of sanafe highschool

Explanation: i spelt sanafe wrong

Answer: a

Is this a trick question-

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Lol means F laugh out loud

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Pic

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Laugh out loud

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Im getting points for answering thi!

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Not to count the answers prophesied by Clive.

Explanation:

When Merle and Mavis finally knew that it was their cousin Clive who had dressed as Merle and sneaked into the study room to get a glimpse of the questions which were to be asked the next day, they informed about it to Miss Mitchell immediately.

Merle suggested that their answers shouldn't be counted because Clive had helped them though they weren't aware of his mischief. Miss Mitchell also agreed not to count the answers which Clive had prophesied. However, both Merle and Mavis managed to pass even after the questions prophesied by Clive were struck down.

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It will only show information about the Korean war.

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I took the quiz and got 100%.

The answer is "A" because it is a T Chart

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this other dude is lying he just wants likes

[From Wikipedia] "The noun bar can be countable or uncountable. In more general, commonly used, contexts, the plural form will also be bar. However, in more specific contexts, the plural form can also be bars e.g. in reference to various types of bars or a collection of bars."

So, either!

Hello. This question is incomplete. The full question is:

Paraphrase the passage below from The Odyssey: A Prodigious Man Slept in this cave alone and took his flocks to graze afield remote from all companions  knowing none but savage ways a brute so huge he seemed no man at all of those who eat good wheaten bread but he seemed rather a shaggy mountian reared in solitude.

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It was common for a large, crude and un-civilized man to sleep alone in a cave after taking his livestock to eat the vegetation they needed, away from people. The man did not know how to live in a civilized way, he did not know how to eat properly and he did not even behave like a human being, he did not even look like one, he looked more like a wild, furry and little sociable animal.

Explanation:

A paraphrase happens when you take a passage written by an author and rewrite it by modifying the words, but maintaining the same meaning as the passage, as shown above, where a paraphrase was made of the description of Cyclops Polyphemus, from the original text of " Odyssey".

It is important to note that the paraphrase is not a summary but an adaptation of the original text. In addition, the paraphrase should always be referenced, placing the author's name and page number where it is possible to find the original text.

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Its B (a comparison between the Cyclops and a large land form)

E (a comparison between the Cyclops and Odysseus)

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Communication breakdown is the failure to properly exchange information between one or more persons.

Note that for communication to occur, there must exist:

Some reasons for communication breakdown include:

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The text explains, "Although there are seeds in raspberry puree, many like the pure, fresh berry flavor."

Explanation:

The phrase selected and shown above highlights that raspberry ripple is the best flavor of ice cream. This is because the narrator emphasizes the qualities of the raspberry ripple at the expense of its defects, showing that no other flavor can compare to this and that is why people choose it. In other words, the narrator states that yes, the raspberry ripple has seeds, which may even be a defect, but that does not cancel the raspberry ripple's ability to have the pure and fresh red fruit flavor.

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BOTH

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So I didnt feel like doing this so I looked it up and nobody had an answer, so I figured I would do it myself and answer it on here. I'm doing the program oddysseyware, and in the reading for the question its states that the writing should be about the civil war.  Heres what I wrote:

(Also it is 131 words)

Explanation:

In April of 1861, the civil war was formally bugan after southern forces had brought fire upon south Carolina. During this time women's roles changed drastically. Numerous women were left at home to fend for themselves, keep a family going, or maintain a business. Other women went a little more outside the bounds and spied for their cause or followed a particular unit as a daughter of the regiment. There even have been numerous discoveries of women who disguised themselves as men to serve as soldiers. An 1896 story about Mary Stevens Jenkins, who died in 1881, tells an equally brief tale. She enlisted in a Pennsylvania regiment when still a schoolgirl, remained in the army two years, received several wounds, and was discharged without anyone ever realizing she was female.

The civil war officially began in April 1861 as southern armies fired against South Carolina. Women's responsibilities saw a significant transformation during this time. Many women were left behind at home to care for their families, run businesses, or fend for themselves. Some ladies went a bit farther than others, spying for their cause or enlisting as the daughter of a certain regiment to accompany a particular unit.

An intrastate or civil war is a conflict between established factions inside a single state. One side's objective may be to seize power in the nation or a specific area, secure regional independence, or alter governmental practices.

Armed conflict frequently causes infrastructure devastation, forced migration, and ongoing refugee issues. Institutions in the social, political, and economic spheres can sustain long-term harm. There are significant negative effects of conflict, particularly civil war, on development.

Since the end of World War II, civil wars have lasted an average of little over four years, a significant increase from the one-and-a-half-year average of the years between 1900 and 1944.

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Answer:

I'm not sure what the question is.

Explanation:

If you post the statements I can help you answer it, but so far there is only one statement.