What types of descriptive language strengthen the
revision?
strong verbs and precise adjectives
strong verbs and hyperbole
simile and precise adjectives
simile and hyperbole

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Answer 1

Answer:

strong verb and hyperbole

Explanation:

lesson 4 unit 3 chance and choice

Answer 2

Answer:

hyperbole and figurative language

Explanation:

First Draft:  Last week, I won two tickets to see the hottest band in the country perform. I will never forget the anticipation I felt waiting to find out if I was the lucky caller. The only problem was that I would have to choose who to go with me: Jackie or Sharon.

Revision: Last week, I won two tickets to see the hottest band in the country perform. I was on pins and needles as I hung on the line, dying to see if I was the lucky caller. The only problem was that I would be forced to make a choice between my two best friends. Should I invite Jackie or Sharon?

As you can see the revision uses hyperboles and figurative language so it makes it harder to make a choice.


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Read the following passage from Anne Sexton's poem, "Young" and answer the question.
____________________
A thousand doors ago

when I was a lonely kid

in a big house with four

garages and it was summer

as long as I could remember,

I lay on the lawn at night,

clover wrinkling over me,

the wise stars bedding over me,
____________________________

What can we infer about the speaker from this passage? Select all that apply.

A) that the speaker is a younger person looking towards the future
B) that the speaker didn't have had many friends as a child
C) that the speaker is an older person looking back
D) that the speaker came from a wealthy family

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Answer:

D)that the speaker came from a wealthy family

Explanation:

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The fearless child stood inches away from the tiger.
(underline the adjective)

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Answer:

fearless

Explanation:

The child is described as a fearless person thus it is the adjective in the sentence

When are you most likely to use passive voice?

A. When the performer of an action is unknown.
B. To focus attention on the doer of the verb.
C. To pose a question.
D. When you want to sound poetic.

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Answer:

I mostly like to use passive When the performer of an action is unknown .

Explanation:

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Which statement best defines an inference? A. a guess that relies only on the reader’s prior experiences B. a conclusion based on evidence and outside knowledge C. the details stated directly by the author of a passage D. the background information about a literary work

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Answer:

B. a conclusion based on evidence and outside knowledge (reasoning)

Explanation:

a)Are they reading books
b)he is not paying me
Change into passive voice

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Answer:

Are books being read by them?

I am not being paid by him.

Explanation:

What does the simile, “ Soda attracted girls like honey draws flies,” mean? Why would that make the gas station have more customers than any other in town?(The Outsiders)
PLS HELP EXTRA POINTS!!

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Answer:

By saying  “ Soda attracted girls like honey draws flies,” the gas station is basically saying that by drinking soda, you'll be more likely get a girlfriend, and all the men therefore want to drink soda so they can get a girl. (This is completely sexist by the way.)

Banning Cellphones

Write a multi-paragraph outline in which you
agree or disagree with the statement below:

Agree or disagree: School districts should ban the students’ use of smart phones.

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Write about they can be distracting in the classroom and how it can affect the class

The term "resolution' best describes which narrative element?

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Answer:

The resolution is the part of the story’s plot where the main problem is resolved or worked out.

Question 1
Objective: Distinguish between independent and dependent clauses.
A group of words with a subject and verb that does not express a complete thought is called a(n)
A. Dependent Clause
B. Independent Clause
C. Complex Sentence
D. Compound Sentence

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I think the answer is C that what i think ::::::)
A group of words with a subject and verb that does not express a complete thought is called a(n)

A. Dependent Clause
B. Independent Clause
C. Complex Sentence
D. Compound Sentence


The answer is C


Hope this helps

Read the sentence from Samuel Johnson's preface to A Dictionary of the English Language. It is the fate of those who toil at the lower employments of life, to be rather driven by the fear of evil, than attracted by the prospect of good; to be exposed to censure, without hope of praise. What is the best definition of the underlined word as it is used in the sentence? a statement of wit or amusement an expression of disapproval or condemnation a sentiment of indifference or apathy an exclamation of profound admiration or esteem





ANSWER IS B- an expression of disapproval or condemnation (; since the other one is "locked" )

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Note: You have already provided the answer. I will just add an explanation.

Answer:

The underlined word is "censure". The best definition for it as it is used in the sentence is:

B. an expression of disapproval or condemnation

Explanation:

The word "censure" refers to a vehement (strong) disapproval or criticism. If you censure someone for their behavior, that means you condemn such behavior and express your opinion in a severe manner to that person. However, even if we didn't know what the word means on its own, we could have chosen option B by taking the context into consideration. The author is working with opposite ideas - good and bad, censure and praise. Therefore, if praise means an expression of admiration, censure must be its opposite.

The title of this piece references a quote by Neil Armstrong, the first human to walk on the moon. The quote is “That’s one small step for [a] man, one giant leap for mankind.”

What does including this quote tell you about the author’s claim for this argument?

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Answer:

Neil Armstrong, the first man on the moon, wrote his famous “one ... It is the most famous and disputed quote in history. ... scientist claims to have coined Neil Armstrong's 'one small step' line ... We started playing Risk and then he slipped me a piece of paper and ... He says 'what do you think about that?

Explanation:

HELP ILL GIVE BRAINLIEST: Read the following passage from Muir's "Calypso Borealis" and respond to the prompt.

[2] The rarest and most beautiful of the flowering plants I discovered on this first grand excursion was Calypso borealis (the Hider of the North). I had been fording streams more and more difficult to cross and wading bogs and swamps that seemed more and more extensive and more difficult to force one's way through. Entering one of these great tamarac and arbor-vitae swamps one morning, holding a general though very crooked course by compass, struggling through tangled drooping branches and over and under broad heaps of fallen trees, I began to fear that I would not be able to reach dry ground before dark, and therefore would have to pass the night in the swamp and began, faint and hungry, to plan a nest of branches on one of the largest trees or windfalls like a monkey's nest, or eagle's, or Indian's in the flooded forests of the Orinoco described by Humboldt.

[3] But when the sun was getting low and everything seemed most bewildering and discouraging, I found beautiful Calypso on the mossy bank of a stream, growing not in the ground but on a bed of yellow mosses in which its small white bulb had found a soft nest and from which its one leaf and one flower sprung. The flower was white and made the impression of the utmost simple purity like a snowflower. No other bloom was near it, for the bog a short distance below the surface was still frozen, and the water was ice cold. It seemed the most spiritual of all the flower people I had ever met. I sat down beside it and fairly cried for joy.

How do authors communicate their tone in a piece of writing? Identify the tone (or tones) of this passage. Explain how the tone(s) is created, providing at least two examples from the passage and explaining how each contributes specifically to the tone(s) you identified. Your response should be a paragraph of 5–7 sentences.

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Answer: (YOU PROMISED BRAINLIEST!!!)

The words he has chosen which are "difficult, force, crooked, struggling, tangled, fallen, fear, faint, and hungry", shows that he is going through quite a scary and tricky time, but it was hard for him to pass that swamp, and you can see he chose excellent words on how his journey was like. Plus the words " struggling, fear, and hungry", shows what difficulty he is going through and you as the reader imagine yourself in that position and you would feel it all scary on how he is experiencing it.

Explanation:

Which of these is an element of a narrative?

presents or informs about facts
compares like and unlike things
has a beginning, a middle, and an end
uses headings to organize information

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Answer:

the answer is C.

Explanation:

A would be true if we were talking about a informative essay.

B would be true if we were talking about a compare and contrast essay.

D would be true if we were talking about a informative essay.

I think is c that what i think

"I will be studying tomorrow Passive voice

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Answer:

Explanation:

I don't say you must have to mark my ans as brainliest but my frnd if it has really helped u plz don't forget to thank me....

Click on the blue box to choose the correct present and past participles of the verb given.

teach

Present participle: teaches, teaching, teach or teached????
Past participle: teached, taughten, taught or did teach???

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Answer:

The past tense of teach is taught. The third-person singular simple present indicative form of teach is teaches. The present participle of teach is teaching. The past participle of teach is taught.

Explanation:

Inflections of 'teach' (v): (⇒ conjugate)

teaches  v 3rd person singular  

teaching  v present

taught  v past

What is most closely the meaning of scarce as it is used in the following passage from “To His Excellency George Washington?
One century scarce perform’d its destined round,
When Gallic powers Columbia’s fury found;
And so may you, whoever dares disgrace
The land of freedom’s heaven-defended race!

Question 11 options:
A) adjective | rare
B) adjective | frightened
C) adverb | barely
D)adverb | impossibly

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Answer:

C) adverb | barely

Explanation:

That is the closest meaning to scarce in all the choices given

Answer:

A

Explanation:

Read the excerpt below from The Call of the Wild and answer the question that follows. He saw, once and for all, that he stood no chance against a man with a club. He had learned the lesson, and in all his after life he never forgot it. The excerpt demonstrates that Buck is learning to _____. deceive forgive adapt cower

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Answer:

The excerpt demonstrates that Buck is learning to C. adapt.

Explanation:

"The Call of the Wild" is a novel by Jack London. Buck, the main character, is a dog that's stolen and sold to become a sleigh dog in Canada's territory of Yukon. The theme that permeates the novel is the survival of the fittest. Only those who are strong and capable of adapting themselves to the environment and new conditions survive. Buck goes from being a dog living a comfortable life to a semi-wild dog leading a pack of wolves. The reason behind his success is his physical strength and his adaptability. Buck learns fast. In the excerpt, he learns not to try and attack a man holding a club, for the man will use the club to beat him. Such lessons allow Buck to stay alive and to thrive even in dire circumstances.

Answer:

C. adapt.

Explanation:

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What is the meaning of the metaphors Creon uses in lines 538-542? What do they imply about how he will treat Antigone?

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Answer:

The metaphor that Creon uses refers to his authority in the country. This implies that Antigone is in his hands and that he can treat her any way he wants.

Explanation:

The metaphor that Creon uses means that he is the captain of the country, the sovereign who commands and demands and everything is under his control, for that reason, he can do whatever he wants and Antigone has to obey. Furthermore, he can punish Antigone for disobedience in any way he thinks is fair and in the way he imagines because no one will be able to stop him.

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What is this passage mainly about?
A the treatment of people of different faiths during the Muslim empire in
Spain
B
the culture of the al-Andalus empire in Spain
the life and work of Averroes
(D) the resurgence of Greek philosophy during the Muslim empire in Spain

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Answer:a

Explanation:

What specific groups of people does "A Modest Proposal" suggest as sources of Irish suffering, and how does Swift's description of these groups add meaning to his satire

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Answer:

In a satiriacal sense the Irish are their own problem. On a literal sense, the British and the way they treat the Irish are at fault

Explanation:

The specific groups of people that "A Modest Proposal" suggest as sources of Irish suffering, and how does Swift's description of these groups add meaning to his satire is that In a satiriacal sense the Irish are their own main problem while On a literal sense, the British and the way they treat the Irish are at fault because they did not tear them well.

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Why does Mrs. Harrison Smith call the crowd at the president's house (Andrew Jackson) a rabble?


Only ladies and gentlemen were invited to attend.


They were disorderly and rude.


They were very respectful.


She was proud of their behavior.

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Answer:

B: They were disorderly and rude

Explanation:

The definition of a rabble is "a disorderly crowd; a mob". Therefore, the second choice is the most reasonable answer.

If I am correct, please mark me brainiest. Thanks!

when are direct quotes best used in a presentation?

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Answer: In the end, in my opinion

Explanation:

Answer:

Explanation:

Quotations work best in the body of your speech.

The best time to introduce a quote is when you need more support for one of your arguments. One particularly effective time is near the end of a section.

Who is the “doctor” that speaks to the judge before the hearing? What does our
knowledge about him say about Ponyboy and the hearing?

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Answer:

The doctor is a psychologist. Our knowledge of him informs us that Ponyboy is in a state of psychological distress which may indicate psychological problems, moreover, we can see that the audience has the function of judging Ponyboy's psychology based on what the doctor says about him.

Explanation:

The doctor is a psychologist responsible for assessing the condition of the condition that Ponyboy is in. That's because Ponyboy is shaken and very depressed after a crime led to Johnny's death. In addition to having a very delicate psychologist, he is disturbed and in denial about everything that happened.

The audience needs to have a diagnosis of Ponyboy's psychology, so that it is possible to decide whether it is safe for him to live with Darry, or for the safety of everyone, it is best to leave them apart. For this reason, the presence of the doctor is necessary.

How do the descriptions of nature contribute to the meaning of the poem? Is the
comparison of hope to a bird effective? Why or why not? (minimum of two
paragraphs)
paragraphs

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Answer:

Depending on what kind of bird it is it could mean anything. Ravens symbolize mischief and trickery, Quails mean protectiveness, Roadrunners mean mental speed and agility. Eagles symbolize mental enlightenment, hawks mean clear sight and truth seeker, and owls mean insight. Though the flying of birds can be seen as hope and freedom. I’m sure most people have dreamt of being a bird and flying away from our problems and just being free. I thing the thought of seeing bird fly freely gives people hope to be like that someday, just free.

Explanation:

Maybe you can add this little splotch of info onto you answer to make it longer.

Read the excerpt from Blanca Flor.

The Narrator. Juanito took the thimble and started to carry the water from the lake. He worked as hard as he could, but soon he began to realize that the job really was an impossible one, and he knew he was doomed. He sat down and began to cry because his luck had abandoned him and because his parents' blessings offered no protection in that evil place. Blanca Flor watched Juanito's valiant effort to move the water. As she watched him crying, her heart was touched, and she decided to use her powers to help him. She knew that it was very dangerous to use her powers to help Juanito and to cross Don Ricardo, but she felt it was finally time to end her own torment. As Juanito cried, Blanca Flor took out her brush and began to brush his hair. She cradled Juanito in her arms and her soothing comfort soon put him to sleep . . .

[As soon as JUANITO is asleep, BLANCA FLOR gently puts his head down and leaves, taking the thimble with her.]

What do the stage directions at the end of the excerpt indicate?

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Answer:

They indicate that Blanca flor is going to help juanito I think

Explanation:

The stage directions at the end of the excerpt indicate that Blanca flor is going to help juanito.

What did Gabriella predict?

Blanca Flor spat three times into the fire, indicating that she will assist them in their time of need. This act foreshadows her choice to flee Don Ricardo in order to save Juanito.

The spit is part of her power, which will aid them anytime Don Ricardo speaks her name (as we will witness in the next moments).

She would utilize her abilities to deceive Don Ricardo in order to get away from him.

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Who does Chisholm claim to represent as a candidate
for the Democratic nomination?
fellow democrats
А.
all Americans
B
black Americans
(c)
women of color
D

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Answer:

A

Explanation:

Khloe opened the letter and glitter spilled everywhere
highlight the direct object

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Answer:

Khloe opened the

letter this word is the right one

and glitter spilled everywhere

Explanation:

hope you have nice day

Read this claim and counterclaim. Claim: Cities should ban the sale of soda in cups larger than sixteen ounces. Counterclaim: Cities should not limit the size of soda cups. Which evidence best addresses the counterclaim?

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Answer:

A fact about how many calories a sixteen-ounce cup of soda contains.

Explanation:

According to a different source, these are the options that come with this question:

A story about a girl who drinks two sixteen-ounce cups of soda at lunch.An article about how soda was invented.A quotation from a parent whose child does not like soda.A fact about how many calories a sixteen-ounce cup of soda contains.

In this example, the author first proposes banning soda in cups larger than sixteen ounces. However, people who oppose this argue that cities should not have this power. In order to address the counterclaim effectively, we need to provide evidence of why it is actually a good idea to ban soda in such cups. A way to show the reasoning behind this action is by sharing a fact about how many calories a sixteen-ounce cup of soda contains.

Answer:

D

Explanation:

Which statement best reflects the shared theme of "We Grow Accustomed to the Dark" and "Sonnet 73"?


A)Awareness of uncertainty and mortality serve to make our lives more significant.

B)Twilight, sunset, and darkness affect our understanding of human nature.

C) The seasons of the year and the length of the days can influence our emotions.

D)Valuable and difficult lessons can be learned from our life experiences.

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Answer:

The statement that best reflects the shared theme of both poems is:

A) Awareness of uncertainty and mortality serve to make our lives more significant.

Explanation:

Both poems use natural phenomena as a metaphor for life, difficulties, and death. In Dickinson's "We Grow Accustomed to the Dark", the speaker is talking of facing difficulties in life - the dark. When darkness comes, it confuses us for a moment, scares us into believing we won't be able to do a single thing. However, our eyes get used to it and, if we are brave, we'll move forward even when we cannot see well. In other words, no matter the hardship, life goes on. Even if it hurts, we eventually get over it or, at least, learn to accept it. We must have the courage to keep on going even when the future is not clear.

In Shakespeare's "Sonnet 73", the speaker uses seasons and the image of twilight to describe old age. Darkness, in this case, is death. According to the speaker, understanding your own and other people's mortality helps you appreciate life more. If you know someone will eventually be gone, you will be grateful for having them in your life now.

Having those summaries in mind, we can clearly conclude that the poems share the theme that uncertainty and mortality serve to make our lives more significant (letter A).

Answer:

A

Explanation:

What hardships did Noelle face in life and how did those hardships impact her life? *

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Answer:

Family lost everything in a hurricane, went bankrupt and couldn't afford a normal life.

Explanation:

When Noelle was a young girl, her family lost everything in a hurricane and they went bankrupt eventually. It was hard growing up as a teenager for Noelle as she had to take responsibility of her younger siblings and at the same time work extra hours to pay for her tuition and college.After she graduated, she again lost her job, money, security and everything within just a week. However, that was the turning point of her life. Noelle then moved to Hawaii and started afresh with a whole new perspective of life.She learned to love, interact with different people and learned new things daily. She started to appreciate herself, did what she loved the most and grew every single day. Her hardships made her realize that if one falls down hard, it only means bouncing back stronger.

Answer: ooga booga

Explanation: ooga booga

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