Rewrite this into a 250-word paragraph.
I learned how to develop a compelling lead when writing informational essays. It's something I struggle with the most. By writing better paragraphs and avoiding long, rambling sentences, I improved my writing. In my future writing, I plan to use more elaboration and have a more teaching tone. Non-fiction is critical since it provides a glimpse of reality.
When writing my explanative essay, I found a way to increase compelling leads. That's what I'm having the most trouble with. By writing paragraphs greater and deriving long, verbose sentences, I improved my writing. In the Fate Letter, I will apply additional details and use additional coaching tones. Non-fiction is important because they give insight into reality.
what's wrong with this sentence ? . . .
" Let's check out their calender. "
Answer:
Calender
Explanation:
The word calendar is spelt incorrectly.
I made this mistake in my middle school spelling bee. lol
Answer: The apostrophe
Explanation: With the apostrophe it's let is.
List three character aspects about the Flop hated Misha.
NEED HELP RIGHT NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Answer:
Fat, smelled like mint,liked to kill children with his belly
Explanation:
hope it works
Answer:
Fat, smelled like mint, liked to kill children with his belly
Explanation:
hope this helps!!
which sentence is the most concise
Answer:
My answer is C.
In the outsiders, list 3 things that wouldn't have happened if Dallas (Dally) dint die.
1.
2.
3.
how would the story change?
Answer:
1. he would have died of either a violent crime or in prison sooner or later
2. He would eventually kill himself over Johnny's death
3. His ending would have been bad either way
Explanation:
1. Due to Dally's previous interferences with the cops, we all knew Dally would end up the way he did, if you really analyze the quote on Pg. 154 ( He died Young & Desperate & violent, just like we all knew he'd die someday)
2. Dally really had nobody that looked up to him and adored him as much as Johnny did. Now that Johnny died, Dally didn't have anyone
3. He was a felon AKA criminal and would have ended up in jail or he would have died from a fight.
Hope this helps!
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Answer:
Explanation:
sorry i can't help with this answer.
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Answer:
c
Explanation:
hope this helps if i am worng so sorry happy holidays bye <3
Help i put 100 points again
Answer: here
Explanation: the first thing you want to do for this is read the paragraph then find the answer that matchs it.
Which of these sentences is an example of a stereotype?
There are many students in that class.
There are many families eating at the restaurant.
Babies need someone to take care of them.
Women are better at cooking than men are.
Answer:
Women are better at cooking than men are.
Explanation:
Answer:
"Women are better at cooking than men are." is a stereotype.
Explanation:
The other three answers are not stereotypes because they are either measurable or true.
"There are many students in that class." is not a stereotype because the sentence is talking about the specific class, and can be true.
"There are many families eating at the restaurant." is not a stereotype. It is about the same as the first option. The sentence is talking about a specific restaurant.
"Babies need someone to take care of them." is not a stereotype. It is a true statement.
"Women are better at cooking than men are." is a stereotype. Both men and women can be good at cooking. The sentence is a stereotype because it is made on assumptions and generalizations.
Which of these words, if repeated again and again in a poem, might put readers on edge--make them feel anxious?
wicked
blond
truth
mute
Answer: Wicked
Explanation: blond is just a hair color, truth has a positive connotation, and mute is a positive way of saying quiet. Wicked has a way of making something sound dangerous, demonic, or scary.
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02.10 Kick it Up a Notch
You will revise one body paragraph from your compare and contrast article. You will submit the original paragraph, the revised paragraph, and a short paragraph describing how your revisions improved your writing.
View the grading rubric as you complete your assignment. This is your guide to a super submission.
Review your informational article. Choose one body paragraph to revise and copy this paragraph into a new document.
Review your paragraph and make sure you have a topic sentence and supporting ideas for this topic.
Combine two or more sentences in your paragraph for varied syntax.
Review your paragraph for correct English language conventions. Correct any errors.
Write one short paragraph describing how your revisions improved your writing.
You will submit:
The original draft of your body paragraph
The revised draft of the same paragraph
A short paragraph describing how your revisions improved your writing
PARAGRAPH:
Minutes That Matter and Defeating Dragons are looking for the same: help people. Both groups (projects) help people all the time and they don't ask for money because they love to help people, and both sacrifice their time to help people, because they know that all lives are worthy.
Answer:
I DId this before it was a week ago here copy and paste it will help you
Explanation:
Do canteens make a positive difference in the lives of others? In the article Minute That Matter by Kristina Waltz, two teenagers Brittany & her brother Robbie wanted to help military soldiers with their phone bills so they started an organization called Cell Phones for Soldiers. In another article, Food that Fuels by Chad Bailey, Cassandra & other teenagers formed another organization called Food that Fuels where they save food grease & reuse it and refine it into biodiesel. These two organizations helped many people.
In the organization Cell Phone for Soldiers, Kristina & Robbie first began by raising money to help a soldier pay his cell phone bill. Brittany decided to send donated cell phones to the soldiers. They collected old phones and turned them in to be recycled & then used that money to send prepaid phone cards to troops. “Over 180 million talk time has been given to soldiers” due to this organization.
In the organization Food That Fuels Cassandra & other teenagers used old cooking to create biodiesel. They went to the school board and spoke to them about using this fuel for the school busses. “It doesn’t matter how big or small you are, anyone can make a difference. Cassandra & other teenagers are making a positive difference.
Both these organizations help others by using recycled products. Both organizations have earned awards and even Cassandra & the other teenagers have gone to the White house. Although they both used recycled products, they used different products. The Cell Phone for Soldiers used recycled phones to help pay for phone minute cards for soldiers. The Food That Fuels used old cooking oil to refine and make biodiesel fuel. These two organizations may be different and are also similar in being teenagers and helping others.
Teenagers can make a positive difference in the lives of others. Food That Fuels helps their environment by using old cooking oil to create biodiesel. Cell Phone for Soldiers helps soldiers by collecting old cell phones to recycle and earn prepaid cell phones for soldiers. Teenagers help people.
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02.06/2.08/2.09/2.10 Introduce Your Ideas
What does the mother want the father to use the second wish for in the monkeys paw?
Part A
In "Can Eating Less Meat Cool the Climate?" What advice would the author of, “CON: Don't blame farm animals for all those greenhouse gas emissions” most likely give based on their viewpoint in the article?
One should seek alternative sources of protein.
One should continue to eat meat as a part of a healthy, balanced diet.
One should consider eating more fish or living a pescatarian lifestyle.
One should consider raising their own cattle and growing their own produce as small farms are more sustainable.
Question 2
Part B
Which evidence from the poem best supports the answer in Part A?
"For instance, growing almonds, a darling of health food fans, requires a huge amount of water."
" However, it underscores a major point: meat is a highly efficient source of nourishment — and tasty too.
"It is one thing to push vegetarian diets on the basis of health claims or animal rights. The environmental case against meat is a stretch, however."
"They found that a shift toward eating more fruits and vegetables and less meat would increase greenhouse gas emissions by 6 percent."
Answer:
For the first part D
Explanation:
I'll let you know when i get the second part
Which Roman emperor was responsible for a major shift in the dominant religious attitude of the Roman Empire?
1. Constantine
2. Diocletian
3. Hadrian
4. Marcus Aurelius
Which word is a synonym of verify? HELP ME PLZ!!!!!!
A synonym of "verify" is confirm.
PLZZZZZ HURYYY ITS MY LAST TWO QUESTIONS.
That Was Then, This Is Now is told from the point of view of Byron, a 16‐year‐old guy who becomes increasingly frustrated with the violence in his neighborhood and life. How do you think the novel would differ if it was told from the point of view of Mark?
textual evidence has to be an answer to
Answer:
Need more context
Explanation:
Who is mark? you did not give us any information about mark. Maybe if mark had a better life with a rich and non violent neighborhood the novel may be happier
How does Brian show that he has learned a lesson about survival?
1. By pushing harder, Brian realizes that determination is the key to moving the raft through the water.
2. After cooking the fish he caught, Brian decides to take some time to relax and watch the sun set.
3. When the raft is finished, Brian recognizes that it is too late to go out to the plane and he needs to wait until morning.
4. When the raft gets stuck, Brian understands that he cannot control the branches and the logs.
By pushing harder, Brian realizes that determination is the key to moving the raft through the water. does Brian show that he has learned a lesson about survival
What is determination?Determination is an optimistic emotional state that entails pushing through challenges to achieve a challenging objective. Prior to achieving a goal, a determination is present and serves to inspire actions that will advance that aim.
According to empirical studies, people see willpower as an emotion; in other words, willpower is not merely a cognitive state but also an affective state. Researchers have investigated willpower under different names in the psychology literature,
He continues to tell himself to be patient in the morning. He prepares a new spear, catches a fish, cooks it, and eats it since he is aware that he must eat first. He takes a seat and plans his route to the plane. He spends the entire day constructing a raft and devising solutions whenever he encounters a challenge.
Therefore, Thus, option (A) is correct.
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A cliche can be describe as:
a new idea
a form of fiction
a meaningful phrase
a tired, overused expression
Answer: here
Explanation:
A tired, overused expression
Someone please grammatically fix this paragraph ! Tysm :3
" Celebrating holidays in my family can be a classical yet plain at the same time. Depending whether a holiday is popular or not amongst my other relatives - my parents decide to celebrate it or not. A reason behind this is because my family isn't religious. So we aren't really needed to celebrate anything in particular. But we still celebrate for fun ! "
Happy holidays ! Tytysm again guys
Celebrating holidays with my family can be kind of classical and plain at the same time. Depending in whether a holiday is popular or no among mi family's relatives, mi parents decide to either celebrate it or not. The reason behind this is that my family is not religious, so we aren't really in new to celebrate anything in particular (that's religiously related). But we still celebrate some holidays such as Christmas for fun!
Rewrite the story from Hachiko’s point of view.
HELP ASAP!!!!
Answer:
hachiko was a wise dinosaur who wanted to get the new flying car the came out next month so he saved up money from his sex working job and it took him 5 minutes to get the car. glad I could help. That meat was irresistible. went back for seconds many times. My cheeks needed their hourly refill. had to get that cream filling.
Explanation:
I rrad the book many times. trust me I know
Answer:
hachiko was a wise dinosaur who wanted to get the new flying car the came out next month so he saved up money from his sex working job and it took him 5 minutes to get the car. glad I could help. That meat was irresistible. went back for seconds many times. My cheeks needed their hourly refill. had to get that cream filling.
Explanation:
i know
Help Needed!!! Traveling the Natchez Trace could be very dangerous during the early part of our state’s history. Discuss the dangers of traveling the Natchez Trace.
Answer:
There were robbers and cut throats, it was very dangerous to travel, it was very rural and if you got killed no one would find you for days.
Explanation:
Outlaws quickly learned that boatmen carried large sums of money as they traveled through the wilderness, and horses and weapons were highly sought after by the Choctaw, Chickasaw, and other boatmen.
How did Brian's attitude toward the hatchet change from earlier in the novel?
1. Brian understands that the hatchet is the invaluable key to his survival.
2. Brian determines that the hatchet may not be as important as he thinks.
3. Brian realizes that keeping the hatchet with him was more challenging than he thought it would be.
4. Brian regrets accepting the hatchet as a gift from his mother
Answer:
its ether #2 or #3
Explanation:
i hope this helps you!
After learning about active listening in Unit 3, it is time to put your active listening skills to the test and try them out! For this lab, you will be exploring two different pieces of music using the listening checklist described in the unit—and your active listening skills, of course!
Start by finding and selecting two pieces of music online. You are free to choose whatever type of music you like: pop, rock, rap, classical, instrumental, etc. Do your best to select something that is as appropriate as possible (i.e., as free as possible from curse words and inappropriate content) as your teacher will be listening to your selections too.
Create a word processing document and copy/paste a link for each musical selection in it. Below each music selection, copy/paste or recreate this chart (seen below).
Listen carefully to your first musical selection at least twice. Then, fill out the chart based on your listening. Repeat the process for the second musical selection.
Download this chart to analyze each piece of music:
RTF (Edit) PDF (Print)
After you have listened to each music selection and filled out the listening chart for each, it’s time to do some comparing and contrasting.
Write a one- to three-paragraph essay that compares and contrasts the two pieces of music that you listened to. If you need some help with what specific things to compare/contrast, refer to the listening charts that you filled out or the questions below:
How do the two musical pieces differ?
How are the two musical pieces similar?
Were the instruments featured in the two pieces different from each other?
What differences or similarities were there in tempo, or speed, of the music?
Were there any differences in what you were imagining as you listened to each piece? Did you hear a story in either piece? What emotions were evoked from listening to each song?
For information on how you will be graded, please refer to the rubric below.
Answer:
Have you ever wondered how Country and Rap music differ? Music genres include pop, rock, jazz, rap, and country. But most of them have some commons, which confuses many. I compare rap to country music in this essay. After reading this article, you should realize how much country and rap music share and how little they vary. There are many features that individual might compare. Most people assume Rap and Country music are quite different, although they have many commonalities, such strong female performers, and meaningful lyrics. Despite their differences, rap and country have a lot in common.
Rap and country lyrics are opposite. Despite their musical differences, the performers' performances and presentations have certain parallels. Before a country performance, folks tailgate and grill in the parking lot. Most rap fans come a few minutes early and take their seats. For example, most country performers are white, whereas most rap artists are black. While many white individuals attend rap concerts, few black people attend country concerts. The crowds at each concert are also different ages. Rap performances attract teenagers whereas country concerts draw all ages. These musicians can perform everywhere. Most rap concerts tend to be staged in indoor settings like basketball stadiums, theaters, or hockey rinks. Some country concerts are hosted inside, but most are staged outside in amphitheaters. Also, many county performers play during summer fairs and festivals.
The music is clearly the largest difference between the two events. The musical instruments vary greatly. A rap concert usually simply has a DJ playing tracks on stage. A country performance features a wide range of musical instruments. Some performers play their own instruments, but most have backing bands. These ensembles include a drummer, guitarist, bassist, and keyboardist. There is even a violin, banjo, or harmonica.
Lyrics are as vital as a singer's voice. A vocalist typically picks or creates a song that has a deeper significance to them. A song's lyrics may convey a wide range of emotions. They prefer to sing about love and sex. However, rappers are more candid than country performers. People like to country and rap music because they can connect to the lyrics. A song that is not relatable will not sell as well. When you listen to a music, you want the lyrics to signify something to you. When life becomes tough, some individuals resort to song lyrics. It makes you feel better knowing someone else has been through it and won.
Famous rappers include Eminem. He wrote a lot of songs about his life, kids, troubles, and feelings. His song "Mockingbird" is typical of his music. "Hayleigh, I know you miss your mom, and I know you miss your dad, while I'm gone, but I'm trying to give you the life that I never had." (“Eminem - Mockingbird Lyrics | AZ Lyrics”) During a difficult period, he penned this song for Haleigh. The music of country performers is not used to describe their life narrative. They sing about love, loss, or fun. Instead of delivering a tale, country performers utilize song to communicate sentiments. A superb musician, Clint Black. He created "When I Said I Do" for his wife. Here is the chorus: "When I said I do, I meant that I will 'til the end of all time be faithful and true, devoted to you. (“Kenny Lattimore - When I Said I Do Lyrics | AZ Lyrics”) That's what I had in mind when I said I do.”
In conclusion, music is like most things in life. Overall, both country and rap music contain essential and personal lyrics. Rap artists use their music to convey a tale, while country musicians use their music to express sentiments rather than tell a story.
Answer:
We should stand up because no one deserves being disturbed by another human being. Bullying is one of the main causes of kids ages 11-17 killing themselves. It could also stop school shootings. They probably have it worse at home or someplace else. I'm 100% sure everyone should stand up.
By ending it everyone in this world shouldn't have to worry about awakening up and heading to school afraid or nervous. Do you know how much kids internationally and worldwide miss their school work because of bullying Bullies are just putting pressure on kids' lives.
What is the author's purpose for writing "The Mississippian Culture"?
Use at least two details from the passage to support your answer.
Which of the following is not an effective way to find out about a character?
a. How they look
b. How others react to them
c. How the stars were positioned when they were born
d. How they act
Answer:
I think C. It kind of reminds me of how people say "Oh they must act mean because they are a taurus!" Or how, "They must be really petty because they are a Leo." Or that kind of stuff. But that doesn't really define a person.
How did Diocletian change the Roman Empire?
1. He made Christianity legal.
2. He divided the empire into two halves.
3. He moved the capital to Constantinople.
4. He made Christianity the official religion.
Answer:
Option 2
He divided the empire into two halves.
Explanation:
Diocletian also restructured the Roman government by establishing the Tetrarchy, a system of rule in which four men shared rule over the massive Roman Empire. The empire was effectively divided in two, with an Augustus and a subordinate Caesar in each half.
Answer:
2
Explanation:
Diocletian secured the empire's borders and purged it of all threats to his power. He separated and enlarged the empire's civil and military services, and reorganized the empire's provincial divisions, establishing the largest and most bureaucratic government in the history of the empire.
Does the prepositional phrase function as an adjective or adverb?
The scientist methodically recorded the results of the experiment.
adjective
adverb
Answer:
adjective
Explanation:
Prepositional phrases serve as adjectives or adverbs within sentences. Prepositions functioning like adverbs can go anywhere in a sentence, depending on the emphasis you want. Prepositions that function like adjectives go right after the noun they modify
In this sentence methodically is an adjective. Hope this helps!
Newsela article "Hope after wildfire: Tiny sequoias could grow into giants" level 820L
Write an introduction, 3 facts you learned about the article, and a Closing sentence.
Open article in newsela and read
Answer: Where did you find this book
Explanation:
It is March 15, in the year 2514. The people of former New York are in desperate circumstances. They are being overrun, and they are losing hope. The banners proclaiming a Free the Real NYC lie in the gutters, trampled by terrified and panicked citizens. Two teens– or kidz, as they are called now– are on their way home from a secret meeting. As they walk in the shadows to avoid detection, they both trip on a huge titanium cylinder. Etched into the surface are a series of scratched-out words. The only words they can make out are, "he will prevail." They drag the heavy cylinder into a hidden alleyway and twist it open. The glow from their flashlights reveals the contents of the cylinder. With gasps of relief, they look at each other with hope in their eyes for the first time in years.
Two teens were coming over from a secret meeting. They were Jess and Elijah they were worried about what would happen to them if they got caught at night especially since they've been going to secret meetings to save NYC. They were walking home when they came across a surface with words. The words read ''he will prevail'', They wondered who the message was talking about. Beside that message was a huge titanium tube. They dragged it with them into a secluded tunnel and opened it. They opened the cylinder and found contents in it that brought them hope to saving New York. They had hope. In the cylinder was a bunch of things to help them. There was a list of steps and a message from anonymous telling them that he knew what would happen and made that cylinder to help whoever found it to save the city.
On March 15, 2014, the residents of New York City buried a time capsule. Their hope was that on March 15, 2114, it would be opened and the future residents of NYC would see what life was like 100 years in the past.
Locked away in the titanium cylinder were important artifacts from the present day. The objects were chosen by citizens from all walks of life and professions: librarians, teens, computer programmers, medical professionals, research scientists, gardeners, biologists, and more.
Etched onto the surface of the time capsule were the words of a famous author, William Faulkner: "I believe that man will not merely endure. He will prevail .....because he has a soul, a spirit capable of compassion and sacrifice and endurance."
The capsule was buried with much hope for the future.
Sadly, things didn’t turn out as they had hoped.
By March 15, 2514, New York had become a desperate place. Something big had changed. The city was in near ruins. Citizens were terrified.
Two teens, as they were called now – were on their way home from a secret meeting. As they walked in the shadows to avoid detection, they tripped on a huge titanium cylinder. Etched into the surface were a series of scratched-out words. The only words they could make out were, "He will prevail."
The kidz dragged the heavy cylinder into a hidden alleyway and twisted it open. The glow from their flashlights revealed what was inside. With gasps of relief, they looked at each other with hope in their eyes for the first time in years. It was an article from 2505! They discovered that it was written about how the leader of the formerly NYC was planning to build a machine that could wipe out the entire city! They rushed back to the secret base of the Free the Real NYC resistance. They put the container on the table. Now that it was in better lighting, they could read the rest of the etchings. They read ψοφώ, Greek for "I'm dying." They learn that the etching was written by the founder of the resistance, Henry Gihigal. He wrote it when the leader of the Cultists, Tabea Thomas, was torturing him with methods unheard of. He wrote the "He will prevail" section speaking of the resistance. The "ψοφώ" was to tell the resistance to choose a new leader. They started planning their attack to make sure that the machine was destroyed.
your introduction (exposition), and the middle (rising action and climax), you will write the end (falling action and resolution) of your narrative story.
The conclusion to your narrative should be 50 words or more.
Write the events that occur right after the climax
Write a resolution with a theme (the life lesson you want your protagonist and your reader to learn)
Write in the third person point of view
Submit your entire narrative to your instructor (introduction, body, and conclusion).
To help your instructor locate your newly added ending, write the word conclusion in parentheses between the middle and the first word of the conclusion.
Save your work to your computer or drive.
Submit your work in 03.08 The Big Finish.
Answer:
did you put your semester exam on brainly bro?
Explanation:
Which multimedia and interactive elements do you think would best support your viewpoint on the topic you chose for your blog? Write two to four sentences explaining what multimedia and interactivity you will use and why.
Answer: It depends on the topic that you chose for your blog.
Explanation: The best thing to probably write is how it interests you. I wish I could help more but I can't without knowing about your topic. Sorry!