Read the two paragraphs representing a first draft and a revision of a narrative about making a difficult choice. First Draft: I will never forget the day I got my dog at the animal shelter. I felt terrible for the dogs and cats behind the glass. I saw Bandit right away. He was a small brown and black terrier mix who came right to me as the shelter employee opened the door to his cage. Revision: I will never forget the day I rescued my dog from the animal shelter. My heart broke for the dogs and cats behind the glass. I spotted Bandit right away. He was a small brown and black terrier mix who bounded into my arms as the shelter volunteer released him from his cage. What types of descriptive language strengthen the revision? strong verbs and precise adjectives strong verbs and hyperbole simile and precise adjectives simile and hyperbole.

According to above paragraphs, the types of descriptive language strengthen the revision include option B: strong verbs and hyperbole.

A descriptive language defined as the language that describe a detailed version about particular person or a place.

Under descriptive language, hyperbole was a device that hold a kind of exaggeration in a particular speech.

Therefore, correct option is B.

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Answer:

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It wasn't too neighborly when he poisoned my poodle.

Is this a hyperbole or understatement???

Enlisted selection boards are convened by what authority.

Which of these sentences has a verb tense error?
A. I seen a very bad wreck on the highway.
B. I need to get my mother a birthday gift.
C. I believe this paper needs another revision.
D. I got a good grade on my English paper.

Cite Evidence Which sensory details does Bass include to highlight the unusual nature of Ann's experience under the ice?

1- It’s not necessary to buy new clothes for the party. (have to)​

Read the sentences from paragraph 3.

Dust storms stir up bacteria, molds, and fungi, which can cause “valley fever,” an infection that often follows dust storms in Phoenix. Virologists believe valley fever is caused by a soil fungus.

Think about the suffix -logist. What is the meaning of virologists above?

biologists who study fungi

doctors who try to find cures for diseases

scientists who study tiny particles that cause diseases

people who become sick after breathing in too much dust

Read this sentence from a writer's first draft.
She walked across the room.
Another student recommended that the writer replace some of the words in the sentence to help readers visualize the story more vividly. Which sentence provides the BEST replacement?
A. The waitress dashed across the kitchen.
B. She walked across the room like a happy child.
C. She slowly walked across the dirty room.
D. Across the room she walked. I know for sure it’s not D or C!

Nature
Plants require regular nourishment for healthy growth, and gain most of the nourishment from their surroundings. But humans can play a part in aiding their growth too. Composting is a method of boosting plant growth and nourishment by adding a nutrient-rich mixture into the soil to enrich the soil with carbon and nitrogen.

Almost any food item can be used to create compost. As much as 30 percent of household waste can be converted into compost. Creating compost is an extremely easy process. All one needs to do is gather items such as table scraps, wood scraps, tealeaves, coffee beans, corncobs, eggshells, manure—an organic matter made from animal feces, and other similar items, and mix them well into the soil. Plenty of sunlight, the right equipment, and a good compost bin can create a decent batch of compost. It serves as an excellent alternative for chemical fertilizers.

Composting enriches the soil and prevents pollution. It also keeps the soil moist and prevents plants from contracting diseases. Composting is a relaxing and fulfilling activity that even teenagers can attempt. It will not only give them immense joy to watch their plants grow beautifully, but also educate them about recycling waste products.


Passage 2
The Task of Composting
Though organic compost is beneficial for nurturing plants, the task of composting itself isn't easy. Composting requires time and effort to compile the right mixture, and one has to be willing to work on making the compost every day. It is also important to have the right equipment and preserve the compost properly. There is always the risk of insects and rodents damaging the homemade compost.

Additionally, the effort put into making the compost does not always take root. Composting requires proper space and climatic conditions. Cold or dry weather is not ideal for compost, unless one constantly keeps the pile moist. Compost requires a lot of sunlight, which is not always available during winter. Lack of sunlight hampers the decomposition of materials in the compost.

Lastly, creating the right compost requires a trained hand and an expert's guidance. Using wrong kitchen ingredients such as bone scraps, whole eggs, fatty foods, or oil in the compost may damage the plant. One should especially be cautious about using manure made from cat or dog feces in the compost to grow vegetables as it can contain bacteria that can cause diseases in the plant. Nutrient imbalance in the compost could also affect the plants as too much of nitrogen or carbon could corrupt the soil.

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What piece of information from passage 2 conflicts with the information from passage 1?
A.
Compost does not always benefits the plant.
B.
Kitchen wastes are utilized to make compost.
C.
Organic compost is more beneficial than chemical fertilizers.
D.
Bacteria in some compost can cause diseases in plants.

define figurative language

What is the core message of 'Epitaph on a Tyrant' by Auden? Use quotes and peel paragraph (360 words).

The Bishop said, ‘some animals resent being watched while they are eating.' Do you think he came to the drawing room because he did not want to upset the leopard? Could there be another reason? What does the Bishop's manner in this instance reveal about him?

Can somebody help me with some religion questions?

1) What kind of organization does the paragraph use?
A) sequential order
B) cause and effect
C) question and answer
D) similarity and difference

Write a research-based argumentative essay for or against free education for children worldwide. Final Draft PLSSSS HELP

Guys does the 4th one right?​

Can anyone please help me on this question?

which answer is the best example of imagery from Crane's "A Great Mistake"?

examples:

A. He had never ventured very near to the stand.
B. The babe came to often to this corner.
C. The sweets of the world had laid there in dazzling rows, tumbled in luxurious heaps.

Read the excerpt from The Riddle of the Rosetta Stone.

Young made several mistakes. He thought the third hieroglyph was part of the one for “T,” whereas it actually stood for the vowel “O’.” The fourth hieroglyph, the lion, meant just “L,” the fifth meant “M,” and the last hieroglyph stood simply for “S.” In other words, the spelling in Egyptian was “Ptolmis,” not “Ptolemaios.”

Which statement best describes this excerpt?

This excerpt is biased because it reflects an attitude about Young’s actions.
This excerpt is biased because it reflects an attitude about Egyptian spelling.
This excerpt is unbiased because it provides opinions about Egyptian spelling.
This excerpt is unbiased because it provides details about Young’s actions.

What are you doing when you analyze something?
Select one:

a.
When you analyze something, you decide how something would serve you the best.

b.
When you analyze something, you examine the parts of it in order to better understand the whole.

c.
When you analyze something, you write about an article or a piece of literature.

d.
When you analyze something, you navigate all the information that is available.

PLEASE HELP QUICKLY: (FIRST ANSWER GETS BRAINLIEST)

QUESTION IS IN PHOTOGRAPH



A score of three is best because the essay is clearly focused on the task, and it contains no errors in spelling and grammar.



A score of one is best because the writing does not stay on task, and it contains many spelling and grammar errors.



A score of two is best because, although the writing stays on task, there are some errors in spelling and grammar.

PLS HELP with this 20 points

william pitts speech and benjamin franklins testimony both critique

the sister was not supposed to be home from school yet. she hears a noise and hides in the bathroom. now her grandma that just came home rushes to the bathroom to use it

it this

situational
dramatic
verbal ​​

Hi .
I need a short but informative paragraph on what HIV/AIDS is .

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What is the conflict of the story story under the rug by Jon scieszka

Jamile is recording secretary of our school´s student council. His primary job is to take notes of each meeting and presents a brief summary at the next one. But Jamile´s summaries include almost every comment from every council member. Dina has told him the only problem with his presentation is that they__.

The price of an 8 minute phone call is 1.20. What is the price of a 17- minute phone call?

Read this passage:

You should try to learn as much as you can about the medical plan before you buy. That means you can contact your state insurance commissioner, Better Business Bureau, or state law enforcement agencies to find out about the company offering the plan. Also, learn about specific medical discount plans or claims being made. Above all, you should make sure you completely understand the company and the plan before you pay any money for it.

What could make the personal writing in this passage more technical in nature?

A.
adding more depth to the descriptions
B.
stating more facts and fewer opinions
C.
using an example to explain the main points
D.
listing the names of all the agencies

Read the selection below from the short story “The Pit and the Pendulum” by Edgar Allan Poe and answer the question that follows.



I saw clearly the doom which had been prepared for me, and congratulated myself upon the timely accident by which I had escaped. Another step before my fall, and the world had seen me no more and the death just avoided was of that very character which I had regarded as fabulous and frivolous in the tales respecting the Inquisition. To the victims of its tyranny, there was the choice of death with its direst physical agonies, or death with its most hideous moral horrors. I had been reserved for the latter. By long suffering my nerves had been unstrung, until I trembled at the sound of my own voice, and had become in every respect a fitting subject for the species of torture which awaited me.



Which excerpt portrays the narrator’s madness best?

“I saw clearly the doom which had been prepared for me . . . .”
“By long suffering my nerves had been unstrung, until I trembled at the sound of my own voice . . . .”
“Another step before my fall, and the world had seen me no more . . . .”
“[T]here was the choice of death with its direst physical agonies, or death with its most hideous moral horrors.”

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