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there were two girls who loved paranormal things. they read every blog,book, and watched every video on ghosts and other paranormal creatures.
they came accross one particular picture that caught their eye.
it shows an old abandoned fair ground.
they look at the pictures and see that the rides are still there, but not safe to use they look closer at the picture and see a shadowy figure that seems to be a clown, except its translucent.
they see the address.
"hey thats where we live" one of the girls say "yeah it is we should go" the other says.
when they get to the fair ground they hear a faint laughing sound
"what was that" asked one of the girls.
"it was probably just wind hitting an old ride or something calm down"
they look at a fun house.
the paint is chiping and the wood is peeling.
"lets go in there"
they walk in and the lights flicker,the music starts up in a slow and eerie way.
they look around.
they see broken mirrors and and old decorations on the ground.
they look at one of the walls and see red handprints smeared all over the wall and red spots on the floor.
"i...is that b...blood"
"i dont know"
they brush it off as some kind of prank by teenagers.
they go farther into the fun house and see more handprints and spots.
"we should go..."
right as she said that they hear a voice
"why would you leave?"
they freeze.
they slowly walk backwards as a figure emmerges from the shadowy area into the flickering lights.
the light hits the figure and they see a clown.
half of his face looked smashed.
they stand motionless.
"dont you wanna play with the clown?"
they look at him as he steps closer to them they can see the flesh hanging off his face and the blood dripping from the wound.
"what happned to you" one of the girls force out.
he looks at her and frowns
"what happned?...."
she nods
he looks at her
he steps closer to them
they see his costume its covered in blood stains and it looks really old its black and white
the other girl starts to cry
"i was thrown under the ferris wheele"
they look back at the ferris wheel and see blood and rust
"when were you killed?"
"1804"
"216 years ago...."
the crying girl starts to tremble
"y...your chuckles"
the other girl joins in
"you were killed and they shut the carnival down 40 years ago because of paranormal activity"
he laughs
"b..because a kid fell under the ferris wheel"
"but he didnt fall did he?"
the clown puts his bloody glove covered finger over his mouth in a shush sign
he dissapers
the girls moved 1 week later

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Answer 1

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This was a creative piece of writing...did you create it? I think if you improved by correcting some punctuation and grammar, the story could be really good!!

Have a wonderful day :3

Answer 2
This was pretty good. There are some punctuation errors that you should fix, but other than that the piece was enjoyable.

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Which statement accurately describes both to the paragraph from Thomas Paine and the LAST paragraph in the passage from the Declaration of Independence?
A) Both paragraphs ask for the protection of God.
B) Both paragraphs discuss the tyranny of the British.
C) Both paragraphs make reference to God as justification for revolution.
D) Both paragraphs castigate cowards who will not fight for a righteous cause.

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Answer:

B

Explanation:

Wheee is all of the paragraphs?????????

After Dr. Farmer hits and kills the hog with his car, he offers his entire monthly salary to the man who owned the hog. This is far more than the hog is worth and yet the Dr. does not argue or complain, he simply signs over the check. He also does not say a word as the men humiliate him by dropping the check and then tell him to help load up the dead hog. Why do you think the Dr. Farmer acts in this way? Why is it the “smart” thing to do?

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Answer:

because he doesn't want to face a fine or he will pay over hundreds of dollars for it and he doesn't want to get in trouble

What does Aunt Pearl tell Alfred to do?

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Answer:let him go so he could have a chance to change

Explanation:

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Answer:I can not see what it says

Explanation:

Which sentence would be the best re-statement of this paragraph from the article “Those Mysterious Comets”?

Because comets are made of water and dust, they reflect light well. This means you can see some comets very easily. But scientists only know about comets that make regular appearances. This means that most comets have not been discovered yet. Scientists rely on people who watch the skies regularly to report new comets.
Group of answer choices

A. Comets are made of water and dust.

B. Only scientists using strong telescopes can identify new comets.

C. There are no new comets to be found today.

D. Comets can be seen easily, and ordinary people can help scientists spot them.

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Answer:

D. Comets can be seen easily, and ordinary people can help scientists spot them.

Explanation:

Most comets are discovered by professional surveys. We amateurs tend to find stuff in areas near the sun where the surveys don't look. How do you do it? The computer and the telescope do most of the work

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What is the central idea of a text is supported by? select 3 options. analogies attitudes anecdotes examples extremes

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Answer:

A,C,D

Explanation:

The correct responses are - correctly portray the central idea of the text is - options A, C, and D.

What are anecdotes?

A brief narrative or account of a person or event that is generally humorous, instructive, entertaining, or biographical in character is known as an anecdote.

Anecdotes are typically used to illustrate a point or to simply tell a meaningful anecdote that relates to the topic under discussion. They may be used in both daily life and literature. For instance, if a coworker mentions how her cat comes downstairs at a specific time every night when the group is talking about pets, that person has just told an anecdote.

Anecdotes may be about pretty much anything under the sun, therefore they include a wide range of tales and stories. One day the cashier at the grocery may comment on the brand of apple juice you are purchasing.

The employee could be inspired by that to quickly relate the time she and her four-year-old went apple picking in Upstate New York over the summer. That is anecdotal evidence; such incidents frequently occur.

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The author often helped her mother by _____.
Group of answer choices

writing business letters when necessary

speaking to people in authority, like police

filling out job applications for her mother

making phone calls in her mother’s name

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Answer:

making phone calls in her mother’s name

Explanation:

detail: When I was fifteen, she used to have me call people on the phone to pretend I was she. In this guise, I was forced to ask for information or even to complain and yell at people who had been rude to her.

 

Explanation:

Claim: The United States should play a larger role in reducing global pollution Evidence: I read on a blog that the United States is one of the largest producers of toxic gasses like methane Strong Weak: doesn't support the claim weak:not a fact weak: Not from credible source​

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Answer:

Claim

Explanation:

aim: The United States should play a larger role in reducing global pollution Evidence: I read on a blog that the United States is one of the largest producers of toxic gasses like methane Strong Weak: doesn't support the claim weak:not a fact weak: Not from credible source​

150 words about Yourself

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example? cuz if you mean personal, then srry bud.

Write a creative paragraph using the vocabulary words. You have to use at least a minimum of five vocabulary words from the text.


rupture, gauge, traumatize, antibiotic, degradation, magnitude, Richter Scale, epicenter, tsunami, backwash, mahout, aboriginal, aquifer, atolls, guerilla, seismic stations

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Answer:

The magnitude of the mold in the  aquifer made me backwash and gave me what felt like a tsunami in my mouth.

Explanation:

Make it creative! Use your Imagination!

After a series of steep ascents the bike race _______, mercifully, on a flat stretch where bikers race for the finish line.

declines

elucidates

fulminates

deliberates

culminates

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Answer:

Declines is the answer

Explanation:

The correct verb to be used in the given sentence is ‘declines’, which according to the above sentence means to come down the steep ascent.

The action which follows after climbing a steep ascent is to go down or decline or descent the steep, meaning a sharp fall from the steep ascent.

The given sentence means that after a steep ascent, the bikers should decline on the slope of the ascent and reach a flat surface and race till it culminates at the finish line.

Answer:

cluminate

Explanation:

cluminates is the best answer because others word not suitable for this question.

Whose temple did Medusa work in? A) Athena B) Zeus c) Posedion

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She worked in A) Athena’s temple.

Answer:

c) poseidon

Explanation:

Im not truly sure i just know from all the books i have read

Your uncle has asked you to tell him about educational admission so that he may assist you write a letter to him thanking him and giving him details of your plans.

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Answer:

the procedure for admitting students to study at a college, university, or school.

Explanation:

Zander likes chocolate ice cream. He also likes sprinkles.

Select the sentence that correctly joins the two sentences with a prepositional phrase.

a) Zander likes chocolate ice cream, sprinkles.
b) Zander likes chocolate ice cream and sprinkles.
c) Zander likes chocolate ice cream with sprinkles.
d) Zander likes, with sprinkles, chocolate ice cream.

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C !
Have a good day.

Answer:

C

Explanation:

the answer is letter C ( I hope i helped)

Complete the pattern.
admit : admissible
omit :

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Answer:

ommitible

Explanation:

Select four commodities.
iron

polyester

plastic

wheat

timber

bread

paper

pineapples

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Answer:

wheat; iron; pineapples; timber

Explanation:

Which phrase best describes economic context?
a) information about how wealth and social status affect characters and plot events
b) information about how history and time relate to the social status of characters
c) information about how the physical environment of a story affects characters and plot
d) information about how culture affects relationships between characters in a story

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Answer:

option b the second phrase

Explanation:

Answer:

A. information about how wealth and social status affect characters and plot events.

Explanation:

Edge.

What most motivates the animals to willingly keep working on the farm for the book animal farm.

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The animals were motivated by the fact that they knew that all of their efforts would one day reward them, and that if they worked even more, that day would come sooner.

Read the excerpt relating to Roger Chillingworth from Chapter 4 of The Scarlet Letter.

“Even if I imagine a scheme of vengeance, what could I do better for my object than to let thee live,—than to give thee medicines against all harm and peril of life,—so that this burning shame may still blaze upon they bosom?”—As he spoke, he laid his long forefinger on the scarlet letter, which forthwith seemed to scorch into Hester’s breast, as if it had been red-hot. He noticed her involuntary gesture, and smiled.

What does the excerpt reveal about Roger Chillingworth?
He is committed to ending Hester’s suffering.
He has no intention of truly alleviating Hester’s suffering.
He is honorable, regardless of his own suffering.
He has no intention of allowing Hester to live a life of shame.

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Answer:

He has no intention of truly alleviating Hester’s suffering.

Which question might guide a writer to make a global revision?


A. Do the verbs suggest clear actions?

B. Is the language strong and vivid?

C. Is the piece well organized overall?

D. Do the sentences sound good together?

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Answer:

B.

Explanation:

As a writer myself, I always make sure that the language is strong and vivid, but others may feel different. If there was an option for "all of the above", that would fit rather well.

However, since there is not an option of the sort, I would go for B. I am always making sure that the language is vivid and strong enough.

I hope this helps!

In debate class, Nguyan argues that children should watch less television. He says that if children spent more time playing games outside than watching television, they would learn more. Kathleen responds that research shows that students who watch more television actually have higher test scores.

What technique does this demonstrate?

A. rephrasing the original claim using new words
B. adding additional reasons for the original claim
C. providing a new claim that opposes the original claim
D. presenting evidence that contradicts the original claim

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Answer:

The answer is D

Explanation:

Nguyan's arguments contradict with Kathleen's arguments/fact.

Answer: D

Explanation:

Presenting evidence that contradict the original claim.

what are some examples of satire in the short story Rip Van Winkle ?

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Answer:

Rip Van Winkle' is a short story that is a satire. The author uses humor, irony and exaggeration in the story. He pokes fun at people who believe everything they read, and mocks Peter Stuyvesant and the American colonists after the revolution.

Explanation:

Chronological order refers to:__________
a) the interaction between characters.
b) the interaction between characters.
c) the occurrences in flashbacks of the story.
d) the occurrences in flashbacks of the story.
e) The order of events in a story.
f) The order of events in a story.
g) the location where events took place.

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Answer: the order of events in a story

Explanation: "Chrono" comes from the Greek chrónos, meaning “time.” 

In which sentence is the
word novel correctly
used as an adjective?
n
A. I just read a great novel about
life in Medieval times.
the
B. Someone at Starbucks had a
novel idea to make a "Unicorn"
coffee.
C. Oscar spent every spare
moment writing his new historical
novel.

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Answer:

Adjective;

An adjective is a word that describes an animal, person, thing, or thought.

B, is your answer.

In sentences 'A' and 'C' they are used as nouns, they both refer to them as objects, a book.

In sentence B is it used to describe a "Unicorn Coffee".

Example of Imagery of the poem
Ego tripping?

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Answer:n the poem “Ego Tripping” Nikki Giovanni’s personality was greatly shown.  The title of this poem definitely explains the importance of this poem. In each stanza she would compare herself to people who held a large amount of power.  This incorporates how she would be considered “Tripping”, based upon the confidence she held in this poem. There was a lot of imagery present in this poem because she explains every detail of her examples.  However there was one example that stood out the most to me. “In the poem Nikki Giovanni says “My son Noah built new/ark and I stood proudly at the helm”. This line shows her idea of being God.  This was very unusual give that God is very powerful and could never be copied. This shows the speakers large ego, when she compares herself to people who could never be replaced. The structure of this poem is the total opposite from the previous poems. They show a sense of confidence and knowledge and uses capital letters throughout the whole poem. This could reflect the speaker’s mood, while she was writing this poem. The tone/attitude of this poem would a condescending, the act of feeling superior. When it comes to having a big EGO, we tend to believe we should uphold a superior attitude that doesn’t really reflect who we truly are.

Explanation:

How should I start this essay?
Prompt: Should we spend our time focusing on the future or living in the present?

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i think you should start it by saying i think we should in the future because in the present is the future to so please like if it helps

Refer to the Newsela article, "Shelter Dog Protects Owner with Epilepsy." How does this article develop the idea in the beginning that Toby might not be right for Parker? A.by mentioning that the "Labrador Retriever Rescue of Fresno had scooped him up recently" B.by describing Toby as "a thin, hyper, dirty dog" with "a plastic cone around his neck" C.by including that Parker's mother "was convinced that this was not going to be their dog" D.by saying "It startled Mandy Rogers the first time Toby tried to help" Brainlyest + 50 points

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Answer:

The answer is B: by describing Toby as "a thin, hyper, dirty dog" with "a plastic cone around his neck"

Explanation:

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Answer:

is b

Explanation:

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Answer:

B.

Explanation:

This obscure literary device here is used masterfully to contain the lines of this passage into a single, seemingly rambling sentence that goes on longer than it normally would due to the use of connections that could have been removed easily from here.

The choice of keeping in the connections here shows that the author wanted the lines to have a seeming rambling quality to them as they go on and on without stopping by the devices that could be used here.

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i thought janet would be a good worker but it turns out that she couldnt cut the cheese whats the meaning of this idiom

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Answer:

The meaning of the idiom is fart!

Explanation:

The meaning of the idiom is fart!

How many languages have dr seuss books been translated into.

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Answer:

45 languages

Explanation:

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