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02.10 Kick it Up a Notch

You will revise one body paragraph from your compare and contrast article. You will submit the original paragraph, the revised paragraph, and a short paragraph describing how your revisions improved your writing.

View the grading rubric as you complete your assignment. This is your guide to a super submission.

Review your informational article. Choose one body paragraph to revise and copy this paragraph into a new document.
Review your paragraph and make sure you have a topic sentence and supporting ideas for this topic.
Combine two or more sentences in your paragraph for varied syntax.
Review your paragraph for correct English language conventions. Correct any errors.
Write one short paragraph describing how your revisions improved your writing.
You will submit:

The original draft of your body paragraph
The revised draft of the same paragraph
A short paragraph describing how your revisions improved your writing

PARAGRAPH:
Minutes That Matter and Defeating Dragons are looking for the same: help people. Both groups (projects) help people all the time and they don't ask for money because they love to help people, and both sacrifice their time to help people, because they know that all lives are worthy.

Answer:

I DId this before it was a week ago here copy and paste it  will help you

Explanation:

Do canteens make a positive difference in the lives of others? In the article Minute That Matter by Kristina Waltz, two teenagers Brittany & her brother Robbie wanted to help military soldiers with their phone bills so they started an organization called Cell Phones for Soldiers.   In another article, Food that Fuels by Chad Bailey, Cassandra & other teenagers formed another organization called Food that Fuels where they save food grease & reuse it and refine it into biodiesel. These two organizations helped many people.

In the organization Cell Phone for Soldiers, Kristina & Robbie first began by raising money to help a  soldier pay his cell phone bill. Brittany decided to send donated cell phones to the soldiers.  They collected old phones and turned them in to be recycled & then used that money to send prepaid phone cards to troops.  “Over 180 million talk time has been given to soldiers” due to this organization.

In the organization Food That Fuels Cassandra & other teenagers used old cooking to create biodiesel. They went to the school board and spoke to them about using this fuel for the school busses. “It doesn’t matter how big or small you are, anyone can make a difference.  Cassandra & other teenagers are making a positive difference.

Both these organizations help others by using recycled products.  Both organizations have earned awards and even Cassandra & the other teenagers have gone to the White house. Although they both used recycled products, they used different products.  The Cell Phone for Soldiers used recycled phones to help pay for phone minute cards for soldiers.   The Food That Fuels used old cooking oil to refine and make biodiesel fuel. These two organizations may be different and are also similar in being teenagers and helping others.  

Teenagers can make a positive difference in the lives of others. Food That Fuels helps their environment by using old cooking oil to create biodiesel.   Cell Phone for Soldiers helps soldiers by collecting old cell phones to recycle and earn prepaid cell phones for soldiers. Teenagers help people.

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02.06/2.08/2.09/2.10  Introduce Your Ideas

Which site may not be as reliable?

.com
.edu
.gov
.mil

which word most contributes to the tone of this sentence?

Read the story.

Racing to Race

Carlo stopped to rest for a minute and tried to catch his breath. He’d been running for so long that he had pains in his side and his legs were beginning to hurt. He hunched over and tried to expand his lungs, but it was like trying to suck air out of a bicycle tire. His body was too exhausted to even allow him to take a deep breath, and he started to wheeze again.

“Great,” he thought, “let me just add asthma to my expanding list of ailments. I can’t believe that I can’t even jog two miles without completely collapsing!” He finally gave in to his aching body and laid down on the grass to recuperate. He closed his eyes and tried to imagine himself running on the school track in the 1,600-meter race. He pictured himself running steadily toward the finish line, running effortlessly like a cheetah in the jungle. He was so lost in thought that he didn’t even hear Meiya approach.

“Hey sleepyhead, what are you doing napping on Sean’s lawn in the middle of the day?” Meiya asked playfully.

Carlo quickly sat up, breathing normally now and feeling a little embarrassed. “I am trying to get in shape to try out for track, but I can’t even run two miles,” he said dejectedly.

“Wait, how many months are you out of surgery? Didn’t you just finish rehab last week?” Meiya asked. “You can’t expect to run two miles the first day.”

It had been six months since Carlo’s surgery and he specifically remembered the doctor telling him he could start running after six months. But he thought about what Meiya had said and realized she had a good point. After his surgery, the doctor did say rehab would be crucial to his recovery but that it would take time for him to gain back full use of his leg. He thought about how a baby had to learn to walk before it could run. He remembered when his nephew was learning to crawl; within days it seemed like he was walking. Running didn’t come right away, Carlo remembered. He realized it was the same with his therapy. The maximum he had run in the past month was one mile on the treadmill, so he realized that Meiya was probably right. He would have to work at building up his endurance and set more realistic goals for himself. As he thought about what he had already accomplished, he started to smile and felt like a weight was being lifted off his shoulders. He realized that he had run almost a mile and a half before his body started to protest and if he kept working hard, he could get back to where he was before his accident.

“Since when did you get so smart, Dr. Meiya?” he teased. “Do you want to race to the next mailbox?”

“You’re on!” she challenged and took off running at full speed.
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Part A

What is a central theme of “Racing to Race?”


A. Hard work and patience will eventually pay off.

B. Exercise can help heal a person’s physical body.

C. Perseverance is something that is difficult to achieve.

D. When people work together, they can accomplish more.
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Question 2

Part B

Which statement best shows how the theme identified in Part A is developed in the story?


A. Carlo pictures himself winning a big race on the school track team; when he realizes that he may not be able to run, he is very discouraged and disappointed.

B. Meiya knows that she is faster than Carlo, so she does her best to encourage him and also lets him win a race between them to boost his spirits.

C. Carlo is impatient about his ability to train for track tryouts, but after his conversation with Meiya, he realizes it will take time and work to heal his injury and fully recover.

D. Carlo realizes that he may not be able to compete on the school track team but also discovers that, with time, he will still be able to participate in a sport he loves.

select all that apply
How do we know that some pattern, rhythm, or meter was present in some of the Psalms?

Many psalms were sung.
The first line of the Psalm states the pattern.
Many musical words and notes are used in the psalms.
Rhythm is detected when a psalm is read aloud.

which sentence is the most concise

Which word is a synonym of verify? HELP ME PLZ!!!!!!

What usually happens to main characters by the end of the story?
a. They fall in love.
b. They are defeated by the antagonist
c. They grow, change, or learn an important lesson.
d. They find treasure beyond their wildest dreams.

Which word is a synonym of bestow? HELPPPP MEEEE PLZZZZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Help i put 100 points again

which option is a complex sentence

which sentence is the most concise?

Newsela article "Hope after wildfire: Tiny sequoias could grow into giants" level 820L
Write an introduction, 3 facts you learned about the article, and a Closing sentence.
Open article in newsela and read

Which Roman emperor was responsible for a major shift in the dominant religious attitude of the Roman Empire?


1. Constantine


2. Diocletian


3. Hadrian


4. Marcus Aurelius

what's wrong with this sentence ? . . .

" Let's check out their calender. "

HELP FAST PLEASE!!!!
Analyze Reread each poem aloud to hear and feel the unstressed and stressed syllables in each line. What qualities does the meter contribute to each poem? Explain. Here are the 2 poems.

A very popular form of extended metaphor appears in poems that compare something inanimate to a living, breathing human being. This technique is called _____.

Hyperbole
simile
onomatopoeia
personification

I need help on question D And you will have to look at the answer from question C !
I need answer ASAP PLZ! First one to answer will get a brainliest!

help me compare the poem "Funeral" to the book The Outsiders PLSSS!!
In the poem "Funeral", how does Ponyboy compare to Ralph in their experiences of moving on? What results for the two characters after the loss of their friends?

Using the information in the following passage, describe how point of view helps create suspense for the reader.

Passage
Maya disliked the desert because she was afraid of snakes. She had only agreed to go hiking because her friend Melissa had guaranteed they wouldn't come across any snakes. But even with her friend's promises, instead of enjoying the scenery, Maya was scanning the desert floor for any sign of movement.

"Maya, quit staring at the ground and look at this awesome view," said Melissa, thinking that Maya was being a baby and there was nothing to worry about. Maya knew that Melissa was right, so she tried to relax and enjoy their hike.

Deep in conversation, neither girl heard the rattle of the snake hidden on the trail up ahead.

plz help me..

In my town, the Chinese Cultural Center offers language lessons on Saturday mornings from 9 to noon. My parents were born in China, but I wasn’t. My parents were educated in a Chinese language called Mandarin, but I go to a school where we all speak English. As a result, my family worries that even if we speak Chinese together at home (and we usually do), I might not truly understand our culture or learn how to read or write enough Chinese characters to be literate and fluent.


The narrator's parents

I. were born in China
II. spoke Mandarin at school
III. never learned English

A
I only

B
II only

C
I and II only

D
I, II, and III

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Describe the mood during the christmas scene in the opening pages of chapter 15 ?

( book : freak the mighty )

Which word is a synonym of concise? HELP ME PLZ!!

Your brain is the control center of your entire body. Write an informative essay explaining how people can keep their brains healthy and safe. Use information from the passages in your essay.


What are the DO words?

brains, body, control center

healthy, safe, essay

Write, explain, use


(This is probably obvious, I was just a bit confused on what it was asking

It is March 15, in the year 2514. The people of former New York are in desperate circumstances. They are being overrun, and they are losing hope. The banners proclaiming a Free the Real NYC lie in the gutters, trampled by terrified and panicked citizens. Two teens– or kidz, as they are called now– are on their way home from a secret meeting. As they walk in the shadows to avoid detection, they both trip on a huge titanium cylinder. Etched into the surface are a series of scratched-out words. The only words they can make out are, "he will prevail." They drag the heavy cylinder into a hidden alleyway and twist it open. The glow from their flashlights reveals the contents of the cylinder. With gasps of relief, they look at each other with hope in their eyes for the first time in years.

Adam and Bridget were walking home one night from a Free the Real NYC meeting. They were walking in the shadows to avoid being caught by the curfew police when they tripped over a huge titanium cylinder. There were three words etched on it that they could read. "He will prevail?", Bridget asked quizzed, "What's that supposed to mean?" Out of curiosity, Adam opened the container. They shone their flashlights at the titanium cylinder as they gasped in awe and relief. It was a news article from December 13, 2505! It was written about how the leader of the formerly NYC was planning to build a machine that could wipe out the entire city! They rushed back to the secret base of the Free the Real NYC resistance. They put the container on the table. Now that it was in better lighting, they could read the rest of the etchings. They read ψοφώ, Greek for "I'm dying." They learn that the etching was written by the founder of the resistance, Henry Gihigal. He wrote it when the leader of the Cultists, Tabea Thomas, was torturing him with methods unheard of. He wrote the "He will prevail" section speaking of the resistance. The "ψοφώ" was to tell the resistance to choose a new leader. They started planning their attack to make sure that the machine was destroyed.

Using the ideas you previously wrote in your Narrative Organization Chart and your introduction (exposition), you will write the middle (rising action and climax) of your narrative story.

Important note: You will submit your introduction and middle for this assignment.

View the grading rubric as you complete your work. This is your guide to a super submission.

Review the ideas you wrote in your Narrative Organization Chart and your introduction.
Include your introduction paragraph with your middle paragraphs.
Using ideas from your chart, write the middle of your narrative: the rising action and climax.
Make sure you include:
two sensory descriptions
dialogue
two events
the climax event
Write 300 words or more in the middle of your story and write in the third person point of view.
Save your work to your computer or drive.
Submit your work in 03.07 The Middle of Your Story.


(I already did the first part i just need someone to do the middle for me also read the paragraph to get a full understanding and reading the questions as you do your paragraph if you want to you can also do another paragraph 75 words or more to finish it off.)

Which sentence is the correct punctuation usage of the semicolon, colon, or comma?

A
Professor Brown has left; the laboratory, however, you may still be able to reach her through email.

B
Professor Brown; has left the laboratory however; you may still be able to reach her through email.

C
Professor Brown has left the laboratory, however you may; still be able to reach her through email.

D
Professor Brown has left the laboratory; however, you may still be able to reach her through email.

write the plural of each noun.
1 child ______________
2 friend _____________
3 baby ______________
4 lunch ______________
5 bike ________________

At the beginning of the novel, _____ This is because he has no idea what is about to happen and because he is inexperienced in how to survive in a crisis. (Hatchet)

write a letter to the President of Gulshan Club to organize a winter festival program in the club premises.
(250 words)
Hints: food, winter clothes, educational things for children, baby foods, time, date, day, etc.

PLS HURRY!!

What do Brian’s
responses to
these devastating
setbacks show
about him?

Find the units digit of the following within the indicated number base: $(14_8)^2$
(Sorry this is math)