Original:
As the nights draw in and the rain lashes down, it's all too easy to keep yourself indoors wrapped up against the ills and chills. Or, if you have to venture out, doing so only if cocooned in your car with the heating on full blast... Dr. Terrence Latimer, Chief Medical Officer for the famous Team Turbulence, says; "The key is not to separate riding a bike from your other daily activities, but on the contrary to integrate it. Riding to work is the best activity, as that gets you in the saddle every day however, not everyone lives close enough to the office to do that. You don't have to pedal the whole distance, though, as some trains do allow bikes on board. Where to put your bike at work can also be a concern, but if space is an issue then technology has the answer folding bikes.
Corrected:
As the nights draw in and the rain lashes down, it's all too easy to keep yourself indoors wrapped up against the ills and chills. Or, if you have to venture out, do so only if cocooned in your car with the heating on full blast... Dr. Terrence Latimer, Chief Medical Officer for the famous Team Turbulence, says, "The key is not to separate riding a bike from your other daily activities, but on the contrary: to integrate it. Riding to work is the best activity, as that gets you in the saddle every day; however, not everyone lives close enough to the office to do that. You don't have to pedal the whole distance, though, as some trains do allow bikes on board. Where to put your bike at work can also be a concern, but if space is an issue then technology has the answer: folding bikes.
I'm about 95% sure I got the 4 mistakes (I tried making them bold and underlined to stand out)! I want to explain the usage of colons/semi-colons though to help you in the future.
Colons are usually used in place of a dash (-) and can be used for listing items or noting them. I think the last sentence is a perfect example of that. Notice how "folding bikes" is being noted as "the answer." This would be the perfect place to put a colon, therefore: "... if space is an issue then technology has the answer: folding bikes."
Semi-colons are used as a break in a sentence. Sometimes people use it as a "period" to continue two thoughts in a sentence that go together, but are different enough to where they need a break in between. Semi-colons are also used many times before words like "therefore" or "however." I'm sure there's a list out there, but those two were the first to come to mind.
I hope this helps! :)
I'm writing a paper about Aristotle's writing methods, so what is an examples for Patho, Etho, and Logos?
Answer:
Examples of ethos can be shown in your speech or writing by sounding fair and demonstrating your expertise or pedigree:
"As a doctor, I am qualified to tell you that this course of treatment will likely generate the best results."
"My three decades of experience in public service, my tireless commitment to the people of this community, and my willingness to reach across the aisle and cooperate with the opposition, make me the ideal candidate for your mayor."
Logos
Using logos as an appeal means reasoning with your audience, providing them with facts and statistics, or making historical and literal analogies:
"The data is perfectly clear: this investment has consistently turned a profit year-over-year, even in spite of market declines in other areas."
"Ladies and gentlemen of the jury: we have not only the fingerprints, the lack of an alibi, a clear motive, and an expressed desire to commit the robbery… We also have video of the suspect breaking in. The case could not be more open and shut."
Pathos
Examples of pathos can be seen in language that draws out feelings such as pity or anger in an audience:
"If we don't move soon, we're all going to die! Can't you see how dangerous it would be to stay?"
"I'm not just invested in this community - I love every building, every business, every hard-working member of this town."
Explanation:
President Roosevelt gave his Four Freedoms speech in 1941 as his State of
the Union address, asking Congress and the American people to support
those fighting Hitler and his allies. Read the following excerpt:
In fulfillment of this purpose we will not be intimidated by
the threats of dictators that they will regard as a breach of
international law or as an act of war our aid to the
democracies which dare to resist their aggression. Such
aid is not an act of war, even if a dictator should
unilaterally proclaim it so to be.
How does this excerpt develop the theme that the United States should get
involved in World War II?
A. It explains that the United States should oppose Hitler even if he
declares it an act of war.
O B. It describes all dictators as dominating rulers.
O C. It argues that Hitler will not view sending aid to help his enemies
as an act of war.
D. It establishes the United States as the hero that will conquer the
villain
The correct answer is A. It explains that the United States should oppose Hitler even if he declares it an act of war.
Explanation
In Franklin D Roosevelt's "Four Freedoms" speech, this president argues why the United States should get involved in the conflict of World War II by providing support to European democracies despite threats from dictators (especially Hitler) in opposition to these actions, as expressed by saying that "This aid is not an act of war, even if a dictator should unilaterally proclaim that it is". According to the above, the theme or idea in the text is A.
They have been chanting Ramayana ……….7 O’clock.
Answer:
I agree with first answer
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Answer:
1. saw
2. went
3. had
5. drank
6. surfed
7. were
9. stayed up
10. wrote
11. logged on
13. played
14. used
15. took
17. celebrated
18. said
19. got up
Explanation:
Each correct answer makes the most sense in the sentence and does not sound out of place. These words make all of the sentences have proper grammar.
This took a while, I hope it helps! Have a blessed day :D
MY FATHER WILL BUY TICKETS
FOR US TO PRESENT CONTINUOUS
my father is buying tickets for us
Fill in the blanks with the correct verbs given below.
(croak, is ,brush, writes plays, chirp, combines, mows, are look , keeps rises ,has,
reflects leaves, walks, is)
1. Marry ......... to office every morning .Walking is good exercise.
2. We........ our teeth after dinner. It ..........them clean.
3. Salim......... for school everyday at 7:00 a.m.
4. The sun ..........at 5:00 a.m. these days. The days are getting longer.
5. The tiger ......an endangered animal. There are only 1410 tigers left.
6. Vikram Seth......... poetry, fiction and travelogues.
7. Sania Mirza......... tennis. She plays both singles and doubles.
8. Frogs....... ...and birds...........
9. Please ..........for my red shirt. I cannot find it.
10. The gardener ........ the loan once a week.
11. The moon ........the light of the sun.
12. The times of India......... a national newspaper.
13. The UN headquarters...... in Geneva.
14. Maya ........... a pet dog .Its name is Lily.
15. This book....... projects and activities.
Answer:
Marry walks to office every morning .Walking is good exercise.. We brush our teeth after dinner. It .keeps them clean.Salim. leaves for school everyday at 7:00 a.m.The sun rises at 5:00 a.m. these days. The days are getting longer.The tiger is an endangered animal. There are only 1410 tigers left.Vikram Seth writes poetry, fiction and travelogues.Sania Mirza plays tennis. She plays both singles and doubles.Frogs croak and birds chirp.Please look for my red shirt. I cannot find it.The gardener mows the loan once a week.The moon reflects the light of the sun.he times of India is a national newspaper.The UN headquarters are in Geneva.Maya has a pet dog .Its name is Lily.This book combines projects and activities.Plzz help
A theme of this drama is that music transcends the bounds of time. Which event best reflects this theme?
A.
The melody of the song "Blackbird" by the Beatles is a variation of a Johann Sebastian Bach melody.
B.
Kim's mother used to sing her the song "Blackbird" by the Beatles when she was four.
C.
When Kim was young she was eccentric because she only wanted to hear songs about birds.
D.
The song "Blackbird" by the Beatles is about a deep desire within every human heart.
Answer:
B.
Kim's mother used to sing her the song "Blackbird" by the Beatles when she was four.
Explanation:
the mountain and the mouse story
Answer:
One day there was a battle of wits between a mountain and a mouse. The mountain said, “What a poor little thing you are!”
The mouse snapped, “I know I am not as big as you are. But, then, you are not as small as I am.” “Big size has big advantages,” said the mountain, “I can stop the clouds sailing across the sky.”
“So you can,” agreed the mouse. “But you can’t stop me from making big holes in your very foundation, can you?”
The tiny mouse outwitted the mighty mountain.
Moral of the story:Equality
Do Marinette and Adrien get together at the end? This from miraculous.
Answer:
Thomas Astruc has confirmed that Marinette and Adrien will end up together.
Explanation:
Hope this helps you
Yes, in the end they are together.
Thomas Astruc confirms it and I love Adrinette very much❤
Use labyrinthine in a sentence
Answer:
The labyrinthe was unending and convoluted, I dont think I'll ever make it out.
Explanation:
labyrinthes are mazes, and mazes are long and confusing.. convoluted means complex or confusing.
dialogue about school's canteen
Answer:
me:hi uncle
uncle:hi how can I help you
uncle:can you please give me samosa
me: yeah of course
uncle:how many
me :2
uncle:ok have this
me: how much price
uncle: only 20rs
me:thank you
uncle: welcome
me :bye
uncle: bye bye
Read this excerpt from "The Girl Who Silenced the World for Five Minutes.”
I'm only a child, yet I know if all the money spent on war was spent on ending poverty and finding environmental answers, what a wonderful place this earth would be!
Based on this excerpt, Suzuki most likely believes that
Answer: Based on this excerpt, Suzuki most likely believes that the money spent on the war would be better utilized if it were used to help end poverty or find answers or solutions to environmental issues.
Read the following claim.
Claim: Classes on parenting should be offered in public
schools, and so should classes on Chinese.
What makes this a weak claim for an argumentative research paper?
A. The author doesn't state a position.
B. The sentence has too many ideas.
C. The statement is too short.
D. The topic has a limited audience.
Answer:
A
Explanation:
Question 4 of 20
Look at the dictionary entry that follows this sentence. What is the meaning
of the word "constrains' as it is used in the sentence?
"Such has been the patient sufferance of these Colonies,
and such is now the necessity which constrains them to
alter their former Systems of Government."
Thomas Jefferson, Declaration of Independence, printed
by John Dunlap, July 4, 1776, Records of the Continental
and Confederation, Congresses and the Constitutional
Convention, 1774-1789, Record Group 360, National
Archives, http://www.ourdocuments.gov/doc.php?doc=2.
con / strain (verb)
1 a: to force by imposing limitations or restrictions
b: to limit the motion of someone or something in a
particular fashion
2: to fasten with bonds: confine; LIMIT
3: to hold back with force
O A. To hold back with force
Answer:
A
Explanation:
if we think about patients and colonies there were cared for but with limations
what was the real person?
the eyes have it
Answer:
Real person means how is living things,grow,eat food,sleep,breath
I'll like to cheat on these epdentum courses but cant cause you can't create a epdentum account is there any way to get the courses answers keys I'm currently trying to get the English 9 semester grade answer key but can't cause I don't have a account except my school one and I can't exactly download it cause it will be notice any tips?
Answer:
I don't know about that.
Explanation:
Everyone
when the earthquake hit the small town. (sleep) *
Answer: no don't sleep , stay wake and alert to make sure you and your family are safe and sound so if you need to evacuate then you have a heads up . if needed
Explanation:
Why do you think that Bradstreet chose to write about her emotions as well as her
beliefs?
Why would anyone want to let out their emotions and beliefs?
Explanation:
I have no idea who Bradstreet is but any human being would let out their beliefs and write about their feelings in order to feel free,be understood, motivate and support the one's in a similar situation to them.
Use the drop-Use the drop-down menus to complete each sentence so the subject and verb agreedown menus to complete each sentence so the subject and verb agree.
Answer:
menus is not given please enter full Question
The bridge was closed for several months last year while it open again. but now it's O was being fix O fixed O was fixing O was being fixed
Answer:
fixed
Explanation:
I guess though i didn't understand your question properly
Which of these statements about the two-column organizer is true?
A. The 2-column organizer requires the use of highlighting pens.
B. The 2-column organizer is only useful for taking notes while
reading
C. The 2-column organizer is the only way to take notes.
D. The 2-column organizer is one effective way to take notes during a
lecture.
Answer:
D. The 2-column organizer is one effective way to take notes during a
lecture.
Which statement shows bias?
O The soccer coach had 32 athletes try out for the high school team.
O Local residents praised the high school soccer coach for the team's 17 victories.
O Our high school soccer coach is the best coach at any of the four surrounding schools.
This is the 21st year the coach has helped students play soccer at the high school level
What type of Literary Devices is this passage and provide an explanation
" People moved slowly then. There was no hurry, for there was nowhere to go, nothing to buy and no money to buy it with, nothing to see outside the boundaries of Maycomb County."
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Answer: Hyperbole
Explanation:
The type of literary device in this passage is hyperbole. A hyperbole refers to an exaggerated statements. It's an overstatement whereby a particular condition is being exaggerated for emphasis.
Here, the statement that people moved slowly then because there was nowhere to go, nothing to buy and no money to buy it with, nothing to see outside the boundaries of Maycomb County is an exaggerated statement
This isn't possible as people will have places to go to and there'll be things to see outside Maycomb county.
Write on ONE of the following topics.
1. A letter to a hotel manager complaining about their bad services.
Dear [Hotel Manager Name], My family and I had the misfortune of staying at your hotel from [check in date] to [check out date] in room number [804]. During our stay, we encountered a number of unsatisfactory service levels that I think you should know of and hopefully do something about.
I am writing to complain about the poor customer service experience in your hotel during my stay last week. When I reached your hotel, there was firstly nobody in the reception area to talk to the customer. I waited for around 30 mins in the reception hall itself when a man came there. Enquiring him about the hotel room I had booked 4 days ago, he was just clueless and said no booking was done earlier. After having a dispute with him, he finally got convinced of booking a new room. Apart from this, the food served in the room was quite tasteless and I did not feel like it was even worth paying.
I would like to file a complaint so that there may not be any such incidents happening in the future since I have planned to stay there in the hotel for 3 or 4 times in the future also since it is the only hotel nearby the seminar hall where I would frequently need to visit.
I suggest that customer service should be improved well. All the bookings done prior to the staying period should be well maintained so that customers may not face any issues. Moreover, the food provided in the room should be fresh and tasty as customers are playing for this.
Yours truly, {name}
True or False. Write I if the statement is true and F if otherwise. 1. A conflict is a struggle between two opposing forces. 2. An internal conflict happens between characters, someone or something in the outside world. 3. External conflicts happen within the character's own heart or mind. 4. Conflict centers itself within the story's theme. 5. A protagonist is the central character in the story and the antagonist is the opposing force.
Answer:
false , false ,true , true , true
Explanation:
In The Inheritors, how does Madeline react to Emil’s advice that she apologize to her uncle and ask him for help?
A) She agrees to speak to her uncle soon.
B) She admits that she despises her uncle.
C) She implies that he is not really her uncle.
D) She refuses to approach her uncle in any way.
Answer: she implies that he is not really her uncle.
Explanation:
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4. What is the complete simple subject of this sentence? "Her short, curly hair reflected the sun like a bright penny." hair reflected reflected the sun her short, curly hair like a bright penny.
Answer:
I think it would be reflected by the sun or her short curly hair
I hope this helps you
Please help I can’t understand it ………………….
Answer:
You're matching prompts to description so for example you would match name, address, and email to personal information.
Select the correct Peter was helping (to finish the essay (we) where walking our dogs when it started to rain. Anna is talking to (they) about the problem. I was playing with (she) yesterday (you) are doing the homework
Answer:
I think the correct sentences would be
Peter was helping to finish the essay. We were walking our dogs when it started to rain. Anna is talking to them about the problem. I was playing with her yesterday. You are doing the homework.what type of literary device is " At night, he would watch a “single green light, minute and far away, that might have been at the end of a dock.”
Answer:
it is a symbol
Explanation:
the green light symbolizes Daisy to the great Gatsby since it is far out of his reach yet it somewhat guided him.