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I had a frightening dream last night,I dreamed that I was walking high up on an old railroad trestle. It looked like the one I used to walk on recklessly. When I was 10 years old. At that height my palms were sweating, just as they did when I was a boy. I could see the ground out of the corner of my eye, I felt a sickening sensation. I realized there were rats below. Thousands and thousands of rats. They knew I was up on the trestle, they were laughing. Because they were sure they would get me. Their teeth glinted in the moonlite, their red eyes were like reflectors. That almost blinded my sight Sensing there was something even more hideous behind me. I kept moving forward. Then I realize I was coming to a gap in the trestle. There was no way I could go back I would have to step over the empty gap. I leap out in despair. Knowing I would never make it. And felt myself falling helplessly down to the swarm of rejoicing rats. I woke up bathed in sweat.Half expecting to fins a rat in my hand.

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I had a frightening dream last night. I dreamed that I was walking high up on an old railroad trestle, it looked like the one I used to walk on, recklessly, when I was 10 years old. At that height, my palms were sweating, just as they did when I was a boy. I could see the ground out of the corner of my eye. I felt a sickening sensation. I realised there were rats below; thousands and thousands of rats. They knew I was up on the trestle. They were laughing because they were sure they would get me. Their teeth glinted in the moonlight, and their red eyes were like reflectors that almost blinded my sight. Sensing there was something more hideous behind me, I kept moving forward. Then, I realized I was coming to a gap in the trestle; there was no way I was going back, I would have to step over the empty gap. I leapt out in despair, knowing I would never make it, and felt myself falling helplessly down to the swarm of rejoicing rats. I woke up bathed in a sweat, half expecting to find a rat in my hand.

Explanation:

I have only corrected the incorrect punctuation, but there may be some spelling errors and wrongly placed tense and vocabulary in the paragraph, still needing editing. I hope this was a help for you as I have always enjoyed the subject English in school.


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Please help will give 30 points

Descriptive poem (6 or more lines )

You can choose to talk about an experience or an emotion.use showing and telling language to express your experience or emotion.

You can write about
A trip
A city
Or any other subject.

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Have gone to their eternal rest.
There shrines and palaces and towers
(Time-eaten towers that tremble not!)
Resemble nothing that is ours.
Around, by lifting winds forgot,
Resignedly beneath the sky
The melancholy waters he.

No rays from the holy heaven come down
On the long night-time of that town;
But light from out the lurid sea
Streams up the turrets silently-
Gleams up the pinnacles far and free-
Up domes- up spires- up kingly halls-
Up fanes- up Babylon-like walls-
Up shadowy long-forgotten bowers
Of sculptured ivy and stone flowers-
Up many and many a marvellous shrine
Whose wreathed friezes intertwine
The viol, the violet, and the vine.
Resignedly beneath the sky
The melancholy waters lie.
So blend the turrets and shadows there
That all seem pendulous in air,
While from a proud tower in the town
Death looks gigantically down.

There open fanes and gaping graves
Yawn level with the luminous waves;
But not the riches there that lie
In each idol's diamond eye-
Not the gaily-jewelled dead
Tempt the waters from their bed;
For no ripples curl, alas!
Along that wilderness of glass-
No swellings tell that winds may be
Upon some far-off happier sea-
No heavings hint that winds have been
On seas less hideously serene.

But lo, a stir is in the air!
The wave- there is a movement there!
As if the towers had thrust aside,
In slightly sinking, the dull tide-
As if their tops had feebly given
A void within the filmy Heaven.
The waves have now a redder glow-
The hours are breathing faint and low-
And when, amid no earthly moans,
Down, down that town shall settle hence,
Hell, rising from a thousand thrones,
Shall do it reverence.

by Edgar Allan Poe


Comments about The City In The Sea
Savita Tyagi15 Apr 11:35 Reminds me of the sunken city of Dwarka. What Edgar Allen Poe imagined in this mystical and marvelous poem have happened thousands of years before. Mahtab Bangalee15 Apr 10:11 There open fanes and gaping graves Yawn level with the luminous waves; But not the riches there that lie.....great poem; philosophically do deep Harindhar Reddy15 Apr 03:04 To touch the topic deadly death is dreadful but Edgar Allan Poe not only touched it but produced this miraculous poem. That's why he is considered as one of the all time best poet. Dominic Windram15 Apr 01:22 Epic Gothic poem.. born from the dark imagination of Edgar Allan Poe. I particularly like the personification of Death looking, ' gigantically down' from, ' a proud tower in the town'..terrifying! Bernard Snyder05 Nov 2019 07:24 My favorite poet of all times. Wonderfully written!
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He smiles, I cry.

He is outgoing, I am shy.

He loves, I am alone.

He is amazing, I am unknown.

he is confident, I am a mess.

He is happy, I am depressed.

My mask is perfect

He hides me.

Explanation:

What mood does this poem convey (communicate)?
A)Nervousness.
B)Sorrow.
C)Happines.​

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Can you send a picture of the poem?

Here a joke ¨What did Cinderella did when she got to the ball¨

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Answer:

She gagged

Explanation:

She made the prince fall in love with her cause she got it like that

With patience a ruler may be persuaded, and a soft tongue can
break bones. (Book of PRoverbs 25:15)​

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What’s the question?

“One hundred years later, the negro lives on a lively island of poverty in the midst of a vast ocean of material prosperity.”

What is the literal meaning of this figurative sentence from the passage?

A) African Americans are waiting for someone to rescue them.
B) The ocean of prosperity contains an island for African Americans.
C) Some African Americans live on an island in the middle of the ocean.
D) Poverty isolates African Americans from the mainstream of American society.

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Not sure if you still need the answer or not but it's D) Poverty isolates African Americans from the mainstream of American society. (I believe it is)
The answer is
D) Poverty isolates African Americans from the mainstream of American society

Which best describes the purpose of the words “black shadow,” “grim,” “grisly,” and “sword”?

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Answer:

To influence the mood of the story.

Influences mood aswell as theme

PLSSSSSSS HELP I DONT WANT TO FAIL

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Answer:

C

Explanation:

first you go from 0 to positive 4 then you go to -4 if you add positive 4 by -8 it would equal -4

Answer:

-4

Explanation:

hopefully u will pass :))

does anyone here like 5sos?

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i only like one of their songs lol

Answer:

no

Explanation:

Should animals be used for scientific or commercial testing?

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No, it can be inhumane to test on animals because they’re literally being experimented on to see if the product has negative effects

Choose one metaphor from this poem and explain why it is a metaphor, what the comparison means, and why you think the author chose to make this comparison.

What is the Sun?
By Wes Magee
The Sun is an orange dinghy
sailing across a calm sea

It is a gold coin dropped
down a drain in Heaven

It is a red thumb-print
on a sheet of pale blue paper.

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"It is a gold coin dropped

down a drain in Heaven"

The comparison means that it's sort of like a golden coin that someone had dropped down a sink drain on an accident, but someone dropped it down the drain in heaven and it has now landed in the sky of the Earth.

I think the author chose to make this comparison because the sun is yellow and it is sort of a golden color and it is sort of common for things to be dropped down the drain. Therefore, it is like a golden coin going down the drain of heaven and into the sky.

Question 9 (5 points)

Read the two fictional conflicts below. Using complete sentences, explain how the differences in setting might affect the protagonist.

Story A: A boy gets caught stealing an apple in a crowded high school lunchroom.

Story B: A boy gets caught stealing an apple in a four-person lifeboat that has been drifting at sea for three days. (5 points)

Your answer:

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Explanation:

From Story A since we are told that the boy gets caught stealing in a crowded high school lunchroom it is very possible for many to become aware of his actions; bringing him more shame and punishment.

However, in Story B, since we are told the boy was caught stealing in a four-person lifeboat that has been drifting at sea for three days, it is reasonable to believe that the protagonist (the boy) would face far lesser punishment because of the circumstances;

Remember, we are told that the lifeboat has been drifting at sea for three days, which means there may have been insufficient food onboard which likely lead to the theft.Because the number of those that are onboard is lesser, he will face lesser punishment.

Answer: story A: since the room is more congested, more irregular individuals detect that the individual has been seen robbing; thus, their intention is slightly acting. The protagonist's intention is not to look as sinister. Whereas in story B, the ship's individuals are numerous, exhausted, and likely to have eaten a lot. Therefore, they are powerless to get mad or, should I express it, hungry, so the protagonist could be abused or examined highly poorly in that setting.

define and identify examples of reading strategies

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Answer:

Some great reading strategies are:

Explanation:

- Predicting what will happen

- Visualize/imagine what is happening

- Making inferences (conclusions based on reasoning)

- Asking questions

- Using background knowledge (what you already know)

Please help me with these questions!

What do you think a genuine model minority group would be like? Can you think of any racial or ethnic minority in the United States that can serve as a model?

These questions correlate with Ronald Takaki's article, "The Harmful Myth of Asian Superiority" .

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African American Culture

List the categories of information found in a résumé.

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Answer:

Personal information. The first category on your resume is your personal information, which includes a way for the hiring manager or interviewer to contact you.

Objective.

Education.

Work experience.

Skills.

Hobbies/interests/activities.

References.

Explanation:

Answer:

1. Personal information

2. Objectives

3. Education

4. Skills

5. Work experience

7. Interests

Explanation:

a paragraph about odyssey

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The epic poem, The Odyssey by Homer, is a tale of high adventure where the main character, Odysseus is battling evil at every turn in hopes to make it back home to his family after twenty long years. The next 3 Sentences: General information about your topic.

help fast please
What are the 5 elements of
argumentative writing?

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Answer:

claim evidence reason reasoning and counterargument

Explanation:

what are the connotative meanings of the word ordeal​

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Answer:

something painful or hard to get through

Explanation:

like a hard test or a long lasting event

EMERGENCY! PLEASE ANSWER ASAP! ​

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Answer:

the answer is 'the title of Poet Laureate'

Just the part(B) please hurry!!!!!!!!!!

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Answer:

I think that is very true.

Explanation:

Answer:

Explanation: I think its B

Interjections can often be very difficult to interpret.


True
False

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Answer:

False

Explanation:

write a long story about what our school need to improve on.​

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Answer:

They need to improve the time you arrive and leave school. It's been a shown study that the human brain isn't fully functioning until 10 am, showing school starts too early. You should leave school around 3:30 to 4:30, so you have enough time to do homework, chores, whatever else and dinner. Some people are very busy and school get into a lot of their life. Schools also may need to improve the bully system, most are afraid to tell on the bully because of consequences. :)) I could name a lot more because my public school is trash, but these are the general ideas. :))

Explanation:

Help ASAP I WILL DO 20 points

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Answer:

The second one sound like the theme

Explanation:

Exercise I Use a or an where necessary:
1. Lucy ate____
apple and_____
mango.​

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Answer:

Lucy ate an apple and a mango.

An, a . That’s the answer and order.

Select the sentence that uses the state of being verb correctly. It be a book that is all about jungle wildlife. Jane am a nurse at the childrens doctor's office. Markus was a soccer player for his school team. She are a singer for the choir at her school.

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Answer:

(Markus was a soccer player for his school team) is the right answer

Explanation:

Which statement best explains what voice reveals
about the character?
O The voice shows that the character knows a lot
about refrigerators
O The voice shows that the character is careful,
thorough, and concerned.
O The voice shows that the character wants to
speak to the girl
O The voice shows that the character does not like
hot weather.

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Answer:b

Explanation:i did the assingment and i got it right {your welcome}

What is a consistent Verb?

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Answer:

establishes the time of the actions being describes.

Explanation:

Answer:

the time of the actions being describes.

How do particles of a gas differ from particles of a liquid when in the same container ?

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Answer:

gas are well separated with no regular arrangement. liquid are close together with no regular arrangement. solid are tightly packed, usually in a regular pattern

"Don't take it for granted that you will become a cartoonist." Choose the option that is closest in meaning to the sentence.

a. Don't assume that you will become a cartoonist.
b. Don't hope that you will become a cartoonist.
c. Don't believe that you will become a cartoonist
d. Don't imagine that you will become a cartoonist.

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Answer:

D)  Don't imagine that you will become a cartoonist. is you answer but please cross-check it from you teacher.

Explanation:

How does Dobyns’s use of unusual structure affect the meaning of “Icarus’s Flight?”

“Icarus’s Flight” by Stephen Dobyns
What else could the boy have done? Wasn’t
flight both an escape and a great uplifting?
And so he flew. But how could he appreciate
his freedom without knowing the exact point

where freedom stopped? So he flew upward
and the sun dissolved the wax and he fell.
But at last in his anticipated plummeting
he grasped the confines of what had been

his liberty. You say he flew too far?
He flew just far enough. He flew precisely
to the point of wisdom. Would it
have been better to flatter ignorantly

from petal to petal within some garden
forever? As a result, flight for him was not
upward escape, but descent, with his wings
disintegrating around him. Should it matter

that neither shepherd nor farmer with his plow
watched him fall? He now had his answer,
laws to uphold him in his downward plunge.
Cushion enough for what he wanted.

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Answer:

D. The way sentences extend from one stanza into the next pull the reader along.

Explanation:

The myth of "Icarus" and his flight to the sun bringing his fall from the sky is a story we are all familiar with. It was this story that gives us the lesson of not going beyond what is dictated or not to be too curious or greedy.

Stephen Dobyns' version/ poem of the same myth presents the same case, but the only difference is that he presents the other possibility or other nature of the flight. For him, the escape doesn't merely mean an escape from the island or captivity, but it also signals the realization of what freedom is and to what extent it is available. For him, it was "a great uplifting", "fly[ing] precisely to the point of wisdom".

This unstructured and unusual pattern of poetry, the way the sentences are pulled along to the next stanza, without much punctuation makes the reader eager to keep reading. It entices and arrests the reader's interest, pulling us along until the end.

Thus, the correct answer is option D.



The game lasted over four hours I didn't think it would ever end.

What is wrong in the sentence?

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Answer:

There's no comma in the sentence.

It should say "The game lasted over four hours, I didn't think it would ever end."

Answer:

The sentence runs on. The correct format is "The game lasted over four hours; I didn't think it would ever end.

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